rm_don16428 56M
25 posts
3/19/2006 6:09 pm

Last Read:
4/3/2007 5:07 pm



the word is foreign -
the impact all so great.
it will want you to caress,
and sure to leave a mood
in the thickness of limbo.
beneath the skin,
an inside flutters
with a sensual heartbeat
that speaks words of impending
love, heartache, hope and desire.
observations that leave
many an eye dripping
in the romantic swoon -
left by the purr of voice.
a deeper look is
nothing but utter sensation,
when two languages of one
come together at once,
letting you know,
that it's equivalent means 'beautiful'
to work up a man with just
a little poetic flair for comparison
it's no wonder i've been so damn inspired
to dabble in the romantics,
though, shakespeare would be proud
as much as I fear its result.
i'll have to render the fact,
it could leave one speechless
when reading the first time.
but the poem is meant
to catch two slow streams of tears
in a tint of russian accent
that leaves this so krasu'nya
for one so rendered immaculately wonderful.


thanks to one that has moved the soul.

rm_meow344 105F
2615 posts
3/19/2006 10:11 pm

Iam speachless by this poem..All I can say is

rm_don16428 56M
17 posts
3/20/2006 1:13 pm

i am glad that you enjoyed this piece...hugs. romantic pieces are not usually my strong suite, but i was up for the challenge. my attempt was to have it have a different look - perhaps unique in its own way. i'm glad that you didn't stay speechless for to long, otherwise i wouldn't have had a comment...*LOL*

rm_meow344 105F
2615 posts
3/21/2006 9:07 am

Dont you just *HATE* typo's when tasking?..And I do so hate spell checkers.(But will use them sometimes..).Iam Human,I have my flaws.. And I rather like them..*speechless*. lol.. I said to a friend of mine Dear heart he is.. It's National *Typo* month.. I think,I should to extend it through the year..smiles

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