Story? Poem? Disjointed Idea? You tell me.  

rm_aranayd 46M
898 posts
8/16/2006 5:04 pm

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7/12/2008 11:22 am

Story? Poem? Disjointed Idea? You tell me.


The errant thought struck him, unbidden. Unable to shake it. Giggles of pleasure, heard a night before, behind the thin connection of a cheap phone, haunted his waking. He was helpless against it. The imagined scene burned in him still. Though separated by distance, he had been right there with her. Right beside her in desire and release; guiding each other to it.

Oh, but the giggles… He was sure that was it. It had to be. Those giggles were what had him waking so ready. Morning wood was one thing, but this was unfair. She wouldn’t be with him this time, but something had to be done. He surely couldn’t go to work this way!

Well, only one thing to do…

Siana1967 49F
15 posts
8/16/2006 6:53 pm

Nice,
I'd call it a poem but that's probably just the poet in me.
More please,
Siana


rm_aranayd replies on 8/16/2006 8:35 pm:
I have a bit of poet in me too. I just have trouble bringing it out in words sometimes, but I'll try.

twirly_girl 47F

8/19/2006 9:18 pm

It's called a "blurb".
It's one on my favorite ways to write.

And this was done really well too.

-Nikki


rm_aranayd replies on 8/19/2006 9:31 pm:
A blurb!!! That's the word I was looking for. Damn thesaurus failed me this time.

rm_loneremily 33F
328 posts
7/12/2008 7:02 am

I say it's a blurb. I really liked it, though. I thought that it was cute. You really need to read my new blog. It's about my new career. One thing to know about my new career is that OF COURSE I'm keeping a diary for when my luster sours. Then I will be immaculately rich!!! Thank you very much for the care and concern--I think I'll be taking care of myself much better from now on!!!


rm_aranayd replies on 7/12/2008 11:22 am:
As long as it's what you want, I'm glad you are doing better. Be safe, and be careful... and keep me informed. I'll be in Cali soon too. But I'll be north of SF... nowhere near Hollyweird.

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