Back Halls (a very short erotic tale)  

rm_aranayd 46M
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9/9/2006 12:35 pm

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Back Halls (a very short erotic tale)

A couple of week ago, bustybettyboop, the author of bustybettyboop's corner... asked her readers to tell her about the most erotic thing someone has done for them. This was mine, but since it is a true story, I thought I should put it here too. This is what I wrote:

Story? Just for you? Okay, but I'll try to be brief...

Back Halls

I lived the mall life at one time. Worked there, ate there, dated there. Sometimes it felt like I slept there too. During one shift, while taking the trash out through the back halls, I came upon a woman I was sort-of dating. I say sort-of, because we would go out, have sex, and call each other next time. We had plans for that night, a drive-in, but she had plans for right then.

Side by side we carried our garbage, flirting with words and touches. A row of breaker-boxes, taller than me, marched at my right, her at my left. When she turned and shoved me suddenly, I was caught off guard and stumbled. Falling into a small space between the breakers and a thick concrete pillar, I didn't even have time to react before my zipper was down. She was kneeling, attacking my pants like there might be a fire in there.

She was the type to get a thrill from being caught, that's why we had plans for a drive-in movie, but I had never seen her like this. Right in the open halls of the mall, in the middle of the day, and on a weekend, no less, I was given the most intensely-fast and urgent blowjob of my life. She seemed possessed in her need, gasping for air when she allowed herself to pause for it, driving it back in as if it was the only thing keeping her alive. I was stuck between my worry of being caught and the extremely overt attention I was receiving. But, before we could be caught, her enthusiasm overpowered me, and I soon stood on the brink of release.

That night at the movies, I returned the favor threefold. Soon after that, my little Escort began rocking and didn't stop through the whole second movie. But that's a much longer story


twirly_girl 47F

9/9/2006 9:03 pm

That sounds like it was pretty intense!
I'm not so much into sex in public.
But the blowjob sounded fun.


rm_aranayd replies on 9/9/2006 9:36 pm:
Despite the impression I seem to be giving, I'm not really into public sex either. It just happens that some of the more interesting stories I have to tell involve it in some way.

rm_loneremily 33F
328 posts
9/10/2006 8:24 am

It might be my insane fear of going to jail (even for a night) but in a MALL during a WEEKEND DAY sounds like a little much.

I've given bjs like that before--NEVER under any circumstances like that.

I'd be willing to bet you couldn't get enough of her!

rm_aranayd replies on 9/10/2006 11:10 am:
It was the BACK hallways at the mall, but you're right, it was a little much for me too. Although, once things got intense, I forgot where we were completely. I even forgot about the bag of trash I held in my hand the whole time.


9/10/2006 7:25 pm

Please write a book.

rm_aranayd replies on 9/10/2006 10:09 pm:
I am trying... I just seem to be distracted my this AdultFriendFinder blogging right now. It's a fantasy novel, not erotic though.

1deltafox 51M/47F

9/11/2006 12:11 pm

And I can't get DH to let me blow him in the truck! Damn!

rm_aranayd replies on 9/11/2006 12:50 pm:
Been there, and to be honest, it is rather dangerous. It worked best on the freeway, but make sure you're in an automatic... shifting can be a real problem.

The only advise I can give is: keep trying. Get him too worked up to refuse you. It worked on me.

1deltafox 51M/47F

9/11/2006 1:57 pm

I meant parked

rm_aranayd replies on 9/11/2006 2:20 pm:
Parked!?! Wow, he must be really shy. Either that, or I'm just too easy to convince.

1deltafox 51M/47F

9/13/2006 10:56 pm

Well, I'm still waiting for that much longer story...

rm_aranayd replies on 9/13/2006 11:33 pm:
Sorry, I'm a little distracted right now. Been working on something else. I'll be updating soon.

1deltafox 51M/47F

9/14/2006 10:10 am

That's ok hun...your stuff is worth the re-read!

bustybettyboop 50F  
59325 posts
9/15/2006 6:01 am

i loved your story! muaaahhh! and thanx for last night!!! hugz,busty

..just join me on my blog bustybettyboop and still looking for some hot,sexy,creative contestants for my next contest...come join us! need a blog mentor or want to be one?

rm_aranayd replies on 9/15/2006 7:41 am:
Thank you for including me. It was an honor.

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