Competition...  

rm_SusieQ27 46F
2224 posts
8/1/2006 11:22 am

Last Read:
8/14/2006 6:13 am

Competition...

...Entry.

I've just entered the following poem, in a competition.
Read on and see what you think, my lovelies.

Well then?
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Well then,
What is it,
This need:
Is it real?
This impulse, to read,
Every emotion, I feel?

My senses are heightened,
as I scribble away,
You, viewing my words:
Can't think what to say!

Rather an impasse,
Wouldn't you say?
My words all escape me,
As you look my way. /:>

You're sweet and your thoughtful,
With an aura so pure.
Well then, my love,
"Would you like some more?"

{=}Vive la difference!{=}
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Shame I couldn't include the smilies, isn't it?

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On another note, what do you think of the 'notes to God', pic? I love them, they're so cute. I like the one asking God which nationality he is. The child informs God that he's an American and asks God which nationality He is.
He's English...to be sure.
Afterall, God Is Love , or so they say and the English are very lovable too, don't you know?

I hope you are able to enlarge the pic and read the childres' notes.


Luv n smiley stuff {=} Susie {=}


electriccompany 52M

8/1/2006 11:36 am

My favorite children's note is the one that reads:

Who are you?
WHO? Who?
Who? who?
AWW! WHO the F*** are YOU?

Sincerely, The Who


Love the bass line!


angelofmercy5 58F
17881 posts
8/1/2006 2:06 pm

Great poem Susie! I love the notes to God! Kids are just so honest, aren't they?


rm_SusieQ27 46F
2093 posts
8/2/2006 2:07 pm

    Quoting electriccompany:
    My favorite children's note is the one that reads:

    Who are you?
    WHO? Who?
    Who? who?
    AWW! WHO the F*** are YOU?

    Sincerely, The Who

    Love the bass line!
Singing along with you, hun....oo.oo...oo..oo.oo

Oo. I do enjoy a good sing song, don't you?

Luv n stuff {=} Susie {=}


rm_SusieQ27 46F
2093 posts
8/2/2006 2:09 pm

    Quoting angelofmercy5:
    Great poem Susie! I love the notes to God! Kids are just so honest, aren't they?
Thank you Angel, your comments are far too flattering, I fear.

I enjoy writing little ditties though,for all that and am glad you enjoyed it.

Luv n stuff {=} Susie {=}


ilsgicemru 71M
2822 posts
8/12/2006 5:12 am


.................... O_Susie Q

Very nice . Girl !!

..................... ils


rm_SusieQ27 46F
2093 posts
8/14/2006 6:13 am

    Quoting ilsgicemru:

    .................... O_Susie Q

    Very nice . Girl !!

    ..................... ils
Thank you, G.

I'm always happy to see you, hun.

How are you?

Keeping well, I hope and happy.

Luv n stuff {=} Susie {=}


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