Profile Critique  

rm_SergeantSam 46M
5 posts
5/20/2006 1:44 pm

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5/20/2006 11:12 pm

Profile Critique

To measure the basic sense everyone has of my profile as asked in the previous post, please rate it!



Here's the text of the profile. I just realized it may not be active yet.

Isn't about time you met someone...

...who can take care of business when it counts? With interests including martial arts, guitar, and cooking (in the kitchen and the bedroom), you could do worse than hook up with this physically active and versatile man in uniform. Self-confident and comfortable in his skin but always looking for new ideas, this veteran of a long relationship that ended amicably a year ago is ready to meet someone to explore the sensual side of life again. Favorite pastimes include kissing, caressing, and hunting for erogenous zones, with mutual pleasure being the ultimate goal. Yet this friendly guy is easy to get along with too, and has a goofy if somewhat eccentric sense of humor. He’s housebroken too! Clean cut, and a stickler for good hygiene.

My Ideal Person:

The thought of you turns me on! You’re someone who likes giving pleasure as much as receiving, and open to trying new things. If you don’t like it the first time, you try it again just to be sure. You’re comfortable with yourself, having your own mind and speak it when necessary. You’re friendly and fun to be with in public, and a total animal in the bedroom. You take care of yourself physically, but aren’t exactly a “gym rat” either.
Wow! That's awesome!!
Pretty good
WTF!? That's terrible!

941 posts
5/20/2006 3:01 pm

Seems fine to me Sarge I don`t believe in prattling on as you can lose people with way too much to read, so that is plenty good, the rest you can talk about when you have someone interested and get down to the finer details

rm_SergeantSam 46M

5/20/2006 7:36 pm

Thanks for the votes guys! It's nice to get a little ego boost at the end of the evening.

Wetta one,

Thanks for the comment! I agree with you about the length of profiles and why they should be succinct. That's why there's not a whole lot in there. Quality vs. quantity and all that, you know.

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