illusion of my heart  

rm_Screw696969 40M/37F
238 posts
7/31/2005 8:01 pm

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

illusion of my heart


i felt like i had forever for a little while
there was no element of time when i was with you
no hours, no minutes
not even night existed in my world
the sun always shone, and you were my warmth
but nothing was more luminous
then the smile that you put upon my face

i felt like i had forever for a little while
i could have held off to tell you
but i did not waste my infinity
i spoke with passion
not depriving you of any truth
my words were pure

i felt like i had forever for a little while
nothing declined, only escalated
the more you were there
the more we spoke, the more we touched
i became certain that you were the one

i felt like i had forever for a little while
and in this forever
my heart would come to only beat for you
for who you were, and everything you had become

i felt like i had forever for a little while
there was no demand for your love
and it never came

i felt like i had forever for a little while
but i didn't

forever was never there

demonicsexkitten 41F
10671 posts
7/31/2005 8:31 pm

hmmm... curious. is there a name for the poetry style that starts with x # of lines and gets subsequently smaller? any idea? i've written some like that before too. both with and without a rhyming pattern. can't remember if there was a term for it though.

nice poem.


AtomicKisss 58M

7/31/2005 9:19 pm

Excellent! Cudos! Great talent! From the heart and meaningful!!!

AtomicKisss


rm_Screw696969 40M/37F

7/31/2005 9:58 pm

demonicsexkitten: lol, actually I didn't realize that is was a poetry style. To be honest, that was just the way it came out when I wrote it. Thanks for the compliment. I appreciate the input and glad you enjoyed.


rm_Screw696969 40M/37F

7/31/2005 9:59 pm

Thanks AtomicKiss.


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