Hunger Fed  

rm_Sallypus 52F
1056 posts
6/15/2005 6:27 am

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2/14/2009 11:54 pm

Hunger Fed

You feel it inside me,
read it like liquid braille
flowing through my pores
and you crave it
more then my flesh.
That part of me virgin still,
the need I have never spoken,
the touch I have not known
all this excites you.
Not the crashing thunder and rain,
not the little death,
but the raw hunger
you can almost taste,
as you almost can taste my skin.
You ask not for submission...
for that is simple taking
with permission.
You want me bare,
the last veil dropped,
and if I tremble
you will know that I am giving
what I never have before.
You harden when I speak,
harder still when my breath catches,
and you will dance against me,
one touch at a time,
feeding the hunger,
sparking the need,
until I am so ripe
so ready,
that the fruit falls to your fingers
and ready for you to consume.
You want the hunger.
The need.
The werewolf longing
to eat
and feed.

Grendel4s 41M

6/15/2005 10:24 am

Do you do other creative things, like paint, or play music? You seem to be very creative. I liked what you said about your children; having been the single parent to my daughters, I can empathize greatly on those feelings. The time I spend with them is worth more than anything. Have a great day, and thank you for sharing.


6/15/2005 8:32 pm

sally, this is fantastic! amazing power within the words, more in the words unwritten...

Grendel4s 41M

6/16/2005 10:25 am

Entangled? But of course they do, otherwise, what would be the point? Writers and poets transform feelings and thoughts into words, and give them form and substance. For emotions and intentions to become part of that channeling process is natural. I was simply curious, as I have enjoyed your poetry very much. I started out as a visual artist, and since have become more interested in writing. As always, thank you for sharing.

rm_livin49 60M

7/16/2005 8:13 pm

Just about anything I could write would sound trite compared to your expression. Just thankyou.

ezzy1147 32M

2/3/2006 12:44 am

Your words are arousing sally, very poetic... its rare to find a woman so beautiful both on the outside and inside.

Truly Yours ezzy

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