The Other  

rm_Poetical25 36M
56 posts
3/21/2006 8:15 am

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3/22/2006 2:02 am

The Other


well I have thought of things to post and i have so much to say .. not to mention that I am always tired which sucks.. anyway here is a poem I wrote back in the day that I would love to share with all of yall

The Other

Revolt and break free
Revolt and break free
To be the only angel that carries my soul
When the time has come
Revolt and say what was once a myth of death.
My funeral was when you married the other.
The other I couldnt discover
For I was dead

I knew when we first laid together
I listened to every thought of him through your hair .
I asked myself
I asked the sheets that spoke to your skin
About every sin
About the other

She loved me and married him
She hitchhiked with me to get to him

I am not the other

For I came first
Thats why I am still another
Thats why I am still another

BBSOUTHERNGURL 45F
62 posts
3/21/2006 10:12 am

Damn Baby... now thats pretty deep.... and realy good....really tells what you were feeling..... Now Poetical my Sweet Heart Don't be Depressed... I get sad thinking you may be depressed... CHIN UP!!!! and I just need to ware you out one night so you can sleep good.... BIG HUGS and KISSES!!!!!!


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