|Blogs > rm_Kissmystuff > In Praise of She..Ochun|
Come into me...gently...slowly...
just like that.
Stir me...stroke me...
I like it...deep...deep...
just like that.
Feels so good...
Suck my nipple...pinch my nipple...
oooh yessss...like that.
I like it when you reach
both hands beneath me
and spread my lips...
I feel your hands...your fingers...
outside of me...
your penis...inside of me...
The wetness...the motion...
the moist...sucking sounds..
just like that.
The throbbing deepens...
there's a quickening...
Hardened nipples tingle...
my center clenches...throbs...
sucking...wetly around you...
oh yes...just like that.
You hold yourself deep within me...throbbing
your juices...shoot hotly into me...
ohh yessss...like that.
The warm melting...begins
and spreads throughout my body.
The glutteral moans...
rise from your chest.
My long...low moans of pleasure...
mingle with yours...play with yours...
in the light of the rising sun.
I rest in your arms...
as we drift into sleep.
Soon to begin again...
© copyright 3/2006 jfc:
3/11/2006 9:54 am
I am always down with a little erotica on a Saturday morning to help ease my hangover. This rocks, thank you for sharing.|
3/11/2006 1:03 pm
Sensual ... |
inspiring for a weekend escapade with that special someone.
3/11/2006 2:47 pm
I'm starting out i the shower, with my special lady of course! |
Saves undressing time don't ya know?
3/11/2006 4:39 pm
Thanks for coming. Glad you enjoyed the imaging.
Good to see you again. I like the fact that people enjoy my poetry and prose.
Glad you stopped in.
The shower huh...sounds like a very sensual interlude.
3/12/2006 12:31 pm
Great poem Ms. Stuff! |
Any words of praise would probably sound trite, but I want you to know I find it praiseworthy. I won't offend you by adding that you make it seem so real I can almost see myself as the one you write about. Oops, did I say that
I'm new to AdultFriendFinder, but plan to post some of my own poetry and prose here and I hope you will read and comment on it.
One question: Do you think it better to post poems (and prose) in the "Magazine" section, or in a Blog?
"Better for what purpose," you ask?
I'm interested in the maximum number of people reading it, of course, though that's probably a meaningless measure of the stuff's worth, because one or two kindred souls would be better than 500 of the mildly dis-interested.
Oddly, I found your Blog via our response to Miss Kitty's post on "Why I Don't Do White Men."
All the poems I have to post, and most of the prose were written for an African American women whom I Love, but with whom things are probably never going to work out... not because of race, or because of personal differences, but because family circumstances and personal responsibility and character (on her part only preclude us becoming lovers.
I'm glad to have her as a dear friend, though, and I think my writing has improved greatly during the period in which she was my Muse.
Take care and thanks again for posting this wonderful poem.
P.S. If you do visit my Blog and find me too much a "smart ass" for your likings, please accept my apologies. I'm not always like that, but it's the persona I have chosen for my purpose here
3/12/2006 5:23 pm
This is a truely "no apologies made" erotic poem.|
I loved it!