My LIfe  

rm_JohnMacLaine 50M
454 posts
2/22/2006 3:35 am

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

My LIfe


I talk to myself each day
In order to remind me of the way
To live each day as if it were the last
Yet I am continuously repeating the past
I long for the day I wake up and see
How much I have done and what I can be
But until that day I will always be stuck
Drowning in desire hoping to change my luck
Though my focus may be on the prize
My actions speak volumes about the size
I dont knw when the light will go on
Until that time my life is one big con
Organization is key to becoming a success
Organize your life, you'll rise above he rest
All these thoughts and plans are good in theory
Not following through will just make me weary
HOw do I focus how do I move
All I can do is stay in this mood
I hae all these goals, these plans for my life
Why is it I stay put feel wrought with strife
These thoughts are just words if not applied
So until I move forward until I have tried
I am still just lazy, no matter the intent
If no motion is generated I might just be cement


This sucks, but I never claimed to be a good writer..

"I can retain neither respect or affection for a government which has been moving from wrong to wrong in order to defend its own immorality" Mahatma Ghandi


sassybelle21 32F
13313 posts
2/22/2006 4:05 am

It's a good piece I cannot write that good.


pinkplaytoyz 49F

2/22/2006 4:38 am

I doesn't suck, it says it all! And I know what you're feeling...I've felt like I was paralyzed , unable to do what I wanted to do, or what needed to be done...
It's an awful feeling!
hugs,
Pink


lipsfor4u2 55F

2/22/2006 5:53 am

its all good if its from the heart


TheRealThing655 48F
9558 posts
2/22/2006 9:07 am

It doesn't suck at all! You definitely are a good writer. There are a lot of truths in what you say. To me, I love when men can express their emotions in a written form, it shows a depth of character and intelligence!!


aascrompn 42M
6444 posts
2/22/2006 3:39 pm

You think this sucks?? Man, that's really good. I like what you're saying. However depressed you are now, if you don't do something, this will be your fate. It's ok to be down for now, but you have to get up, dust yourself off and drive on! We're here to hear you bitch about it b/c that's what we're here for.


rm_JohnMacLaine 50M
585 posts
2/22/2006 7:23 pm

Thank you all for your positive comments. I have written better stuff, I just have to remember what the hell I did with it all. I havent looked at it in over three years.

Sassy ~~ Thank you so much for reading my blog, I admire yours as well. you may not write poetry, but you definitely have a lot to say, which is a good thing. You have a lot of questions for people and for the most part they are questions I would never think of. I admire that

Pink ~~ Thaks for visiting. You're right is is just like feeling paralyzed and it is definitely an awful feeling. One of these days I will get over it and get up out of my wheelchair.

Lips ~~ ty for the comment, you are so right, it is all good so long as it comes from the heart, and that is definitely from my heart.

Real ~~ ty for the kind words, I appreciate it. Stick around, I have a feeling I will be opening up alot in the near future.

aas ~~ Thanks for the comments. I also appreciate the advice. for the most part, by writing about it, i am healin and dealing with it for now. I will be fine, just need to take it one day at a time...

Thanks again all.....

John

"I can retain neither respect or affection for a government which has been moving from wrong to wrong in order to defend its own immorality" Mahatma Ghandi


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