Poetry...  

rm_Hrd4YouAll 56M
12 posts
4/28/2005 10:41 am

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Poetry...


I've been asked by several friends here if I would post some of my own poetry... So here is one of my better pieces... It started as a poem, but it has since become a song...

"Nerves"

She walked into the room,
My heart fluttered for a beat,
She looked up, smiled and just said, "Hello."
But it felt like such a treat.
The way she moved,
The way she spoke,
Attracted me even more.
Wish I had the guts to say
She's the one my heart is for.

Cause in her eyes I felt that I have the potential,
To accomplish anything I might want to try.
She showed me to myself in a so much kinder light,
I wish I had the nerve to tell her outright.

She looked into my eyes, I swear
She saw right inside my soul,
Where pain and loss and loneliness
Have taken quite a toll.
She also had such kind words,
And a quiet sense of calm.
Wish I had the guts to say
She had my heart inside her palm.

In her eyes I feel that I have the potential,
To accomplish anything I want to try.
She showed me to myself in a so much softer light,
I wish I had the nerve to tell her that night.

I saw everything she is,
And all that she could be,
And all the love inside of her,
That's longing to be free.
Drawn in by her gentle grace,
Attracted to her curve,
Wish I had the guts to say it,
But I just didn't have the nerve.

Cause she made me feel that I have the potential,
To accomplish anything I'll ever try.
She showed me to myself in a so much kinder light,
I wish I had the nerve to tell her outright.

I see her smiling in my dreams,
I hear her sighing in the night.
I feel her love and tenderness,
It warms and feels so right.
I wish I'd told her right away
How she stopped time still that night.
I wish I'd had the guts to tell her,
But my nerves had taken flight.

Cause she makes me feel that I have the potential,
To accomplish anything I'll ever try.
She showed me to myself in a so much better light,
I wish I had the nerve to tell her outright.

I want to tell her everything,
How I feel and what it means.
Tell her how we dance so well,
At least inside my dreams.
I want to tell her everything,
But yesterday we met.
I wish I had the guts to say
That's a day won't forget.

She makes me feel that I have the potential,
To accomplish everything I'll ever try.
She's shown me to myself in a so much kinder light,
I've got to find the nerve and tell her tonight.

- ©HRW 2005

rm_BigDnLady 43M/40F
1140 posts
4/28/2005 1:24 pm

Nice poem!! Really heartfelt!!


rm_Hrd4YouAll 56M
14 posts
4/28/2005 10:54 pm

Thank you so much BigDnLady. I am glad you like it.


GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
5/6/2005 1:23 pm

GRRRRRRR I can't get my comment to stick on here...


rm_Hrd4YouAll 56M
14 posts
5/11/2005 9:56 am

I appologize for the technical difficulties, Goddess. I do hope you liked my song... You are welcome to e-mail me directly, too.


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