Wanting  

rm_EveLWoman 55F
405 posts
2/4/2006 5:07 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Wanting

I am a woman;
a woman who knows what she wants.

I want husky whispers, coaxing, demanding
limbs entwined, entangled, pulsing
I want fingers probing, tongues swirling
warm wet places, hidden scents released
I want breath ragged, hot against flesh
sweat’s shimmer on slippery skin
I want insides, undersides velvet and slick
grunting, gasping, growling, screaming … sighing

I want to be fingers, neck, nipples, mouth, pussy
and not the sum of my parts


NEsailor 69M

2/5/2006 11:23 am

When used peoperly, itellectually & emotionaly, the parts become a geometric product, squared or cubed or better, FAR better than simply a sum.


keithcancook 60M
17718 posts
2/5/2006 11:54 am

Yeah, yer a woman alright!

"I want this... and I want that... gimme gimme gimme..."

Jeesh!

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rm_1hotwahine 62F
21091 posts
2/5/2006 3:14 pm

(eyes the Request Review link

But back to the post...

Yeah, I want all those, things, too. But I'm a little confused about not wanting to be the sum of those parts.

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]


rm_EveLWoman 55F
36 posts
2/5/2006 5:23 pm

NE - cubed? like diced? scary

Keith - so what you're saying is you wouldn't gimme " fingers probing, tongues swirling, warm wet places" ?


onelittlesecret 33M
1579 posts
2/5/2006 7:30 pm

Hmm, you don't want to be just the some of your parts... because you want all your parts to be loved?


keithcancook 60M
17718 posts
2/6/2006 12:24 am

Moi? I didn't say anything in here until now. I'm not even supposed to be here really, but I snuck in because I heard my teacher had spoken, and he is very wise.


ParryPintsPurge 51M
18 posts
2/6/2006 6:17 am

I don't know about these other "flakes" and "over-analyzers", but fingers probing, tongues swirling, warm wet places being touched over and over sounds wonderful to me. Secondly, being with a true woman who knows what she wants and can articulate it and then become that is the greatest gift of all. You keep on wanting what you want and I would love to be the man to supply it.


mikrocam 40M

2/6/2006 12:16 pm

hi Eve,
just discovered your blog and all i can say is mmmmmmmmmmmm...
dont know if its your delectable photo or your sensuous writings... either way, i'll be back.
Damn! its a shame your sooo far away, if you ever get to the sunny parts of europe... well, you know... (or fancy some cyber)
kisses
mikro


rm_EveLWoman 55F
36 posts
2/6/2006 6:04 pm

Candy - thanks yer so sweet

wahine - the sum of parts thing... i suppose its about sometimes just wanting to focus on each individual thing..or maybe its about wnting to be raw & animal as opposed to the 'sum' of my entire person...or..maybe not

one - yes..and yes

ward - now now, some of the 'flakes' are my friends... i'm not sayin they arent flakes..but theyre my flakes wanna join the club?

miz - hi sweetie...well, im not surprised you enjoy this blog...explanation why, to follow

mik - thanks for stopping by


rm_sj365 55F
2414 posts
2/6/2006 6:08 pm

**thank you all for your comments...yeah, even the piggie.

this particular piece is mine, but not all the writing here is. Some authors choose not to claim their work, some do.

i think our disclaimer needs to be repeated here regarding who Eve is:

***This blog is a group effort. Eve is not a single woman, she is many women. She might even be you. If you would like to join us, please email Eve your contribution.***


Vincent_Omnia 46M

2/7/2006 12:03 pm

SJ -- I could have known this was yours without you owning it....sigh.

My hero.

Wow. (BTW -- THAT, ladies and gentlemen, is what meter and rhythm are supposed to do in a poem....)

xoxo
Vince


rm_1hotwahine 62F
21091 posts
2/7/2006 2:23 pm

oh, ok. thanks for clearing that up.

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]


LadytoPleaseYou 64F
5447 posts
2/7/2006 11:21 pm

Yep...I'm a gimme this and gimme that kind of girl. In fact I will take alllll of that I can get.

Very sensuous and passionate.

PENIS CHARMING....where are you?


womanoirish 53F

2/9/2006 4:47 am

Lovely poem, thank you for sharing.


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