When dawn is breaking..  

rm_ByNaomi 35F
1427 posts
4/29/2006 7:55 pm

Last Read:
6/7/2006 10:11 am

When dawn is breaking..

I'm standing naked in the rain
And you're watching me
I let my head fall back
while you're watching me
I close my eyes
Your eyes are opened,
watching me..

My body shivers and
I stand naked in the rain
watching you.
I can see you in my mind
even when my eyes are closed.
I can see you
Your eyes are opened,
can you see me watching you..?

My head tilts sideways,
my eyes are inviting you.
- Join me. Join my naked body.
My naked mind.
Come stand with me,
come stand in the rain.

You let your clothes fall,
piece by piece
they're falling
on wet ground.
Piece by piece,
you're letting me enjoy
every inch of your body.

We stand naked in the rain,
breathing together.
I shiver
as do you..
You let your head fall back,
inviting me to kiss you.

One step forward.
My feet are touching wet ground.
My mind is opened,
watching you.
Feeling you.
Feeling every inch of your body.
Without touching you.

One step forward,
I can almost reach you..
One step forward,
you're so close.
And you shiver..
The thought of my touch
makes you shiver.

I let my hand touch your skin,
I let it rest at the place
just above your heart.
Feeling you.
Feeling every inch of what's inside.
The sun rises.

Dawn is breaking when we touch.
My hand is resting above your heart.
Feeling every inch of you.
Watching you,
watching me.

I follow the path
that leads to eternity.
Loyalty above all.
Dawn is breaking
and I see, only you.

We're standing naked in the rain.
But sunshine is all we see.

Dedicated to "AussieinLondn"

© ByNaomi MyMirrorWithin 05'-08'

rm_Kissmystuff 61F
1435 posts
4/30/2006 9:58 am

Very sensual..beautiful



rm_ByNaomi replies on 5/1/2006 5:56 am:
It was a sensual day of writing..
Thank you Kissmystuff for taking part and commenting.


BlondieInOz 34F

4/30/2006 11:40 pm

You gunna catch a cold and I can bring some warm chicken soup to save ya

rm_ByNaomi replies on 5/1/2006 5:57 am:
Don't forget the blanket so we can curl up infront of the fire place together

Miss you B

MaggiesWishes 59F

5/1/2006 6:55 pm

I felt the rain, standing there... watching you, watching both of you ... drenched in stright gazes that no one saw, but had they looked, would not be able to turn away.
I loved the visual.
I love being naked in the rain.

warm huggies sweet sister ~N~

pleasureyourclit 66M
836 posts
5/2/2006 3:33 pm

Very nice sweetie!

rm_leon5176 40M

5/4/2006 9:27 am

Wow!! Gives me goosebumps.

Best, T

rm_samanthas2 39F
10 posts
5/16/2006 10:57 am

wow,feel like i was there.

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