Metaphorically Speaking.....It  

rm_AmishAmy 100F
842 posts
2/1/2006 3:59 pm

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Metaphorically Speaking.....It

once upon a time....
there was a woman
who met a man
and she grew fond of him
more and more each day
until she finally revealed
her feelings for him....
He questioned her on this...
"show me how you feel
by looking in my eyes..."
and she did...
and he fell drunk
and it was good
but it wasn't enough
"show me how you feel
by your touch"
so she did...
and fire raced up his spine
and it was good
but it wasn't enough....
"show me how you feel
with your kiss"
and she did
with sparks of passion
as her lips touched his
and it was good
but it wasn't enough
"show me how you feel
and undress so i can see you have nothing to hide"
so she did
with no hesitation
and it was good
but it wasn't enough
"show me how you feel
by the tone of your voice"
and she did
and whispered his name with effortless desire
and it was good
but it wasn't enough
"show me how you feel
by giving yourself to me now"
so she did
and crawled to him happily
and it was good
but it wasn't enough
"show me how you feel
about my not believing you"
so she did
and she slit her throat
with a fountain of blood
flying up in the air
and finally
he believed how she felt
but by then
it was too late....

i've never been a game player....i used to walk away from monopoly with no problem owning all the blues yellows and greens.....i didn't just didn't interest me much.....still doesn't....

i don't know what's going on......and if this post has no meaning to you.....i'm sorry for wasting your time reading it.......and if you do know what i'm talking about....and you're responsible.....fuck you....and i hope you can sleep at night with all that evil pinned up inside you.....

bardicman 50M

2/1/2006 4:24 pm

He asked her to trust in him
She wanted to offer more.
He accepted more then stated again.
All I want is your trust.
Many reasons to not offer
Mistrust rears its head
and yet he stands looking
hoping she will turn
turn inside herself
and look and see him
Standing there as always
Hand outstretched
reaching and asking
only for her trust.
Ignore the definite trouble
because the only difinite that matters
is the difinite trust
he has in you

I am not dead yet

norprin5 55M

2/1/2006 6:02 pm

no waste of time, Amy... *hugs*

i can give you nothing
for your pain
but my shoulder to cry on

King Nor XVIII

evilgothgirl 51F

2/1/2006 6:11 pm

That is beautifull. Beauty in the truth, the trust and the love we give to others.

We both seem to find the release we need in the words we use.


spinmedown 49M
3626 posts
2/1/2006 6:20 pm

What Bard said. Go with that. Nothing else matters.

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde

rm_PurryKitty2 48M/49F
9753 posts
2/1/2006 6:24 pm

Eeeeks...Sometimes MEN SUCK!

Hope this finds you in better spirits sweetie

Purry {=}


mm0206 68F
7767 posts
2/1/2006 7:00 pm

It is difficult to discern the depth a man's ego will allow him to push a woman down, but in the search for tenderness and intimacy we sometimes lose sight of the ditch that runs alongside or across the road.
All we can do is try to realize and step back when he starts that old refrain, "how much do you love me?"

tender hugs to you Amy.... may you a rainbow soon in your life.


keithcancook 60M
17718 posts
2/1/2006 8:32 pm

Hi Amy.

timberwolf6972 44M

2/1/2006 8:35 pm

I don't play games and just for the record, women play as many games as men do except for they are more more convincing when they lie then men are. I have been on your end before except for it was a woman doing it to me.

(Princess Lips)

2/1/2006 9:03 pm

hears the pain and betrayel in this...



rm_goddess1946 105F
13518 posts
2/1/2006 9:11 pm

the healing begins when the bleeding stops
a heartfelt hug to you, Amy...

Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...

elbman 41M  
2566 posts
2/2/2006 12:50 am

I'm here you know how to find me if you need an ear........

oldemt47 69M

2/2/2006 7:40 am

Some men will take all the can get and not return the gift. I am sorry you found one who did that. All I can say is that there are good and bad men and women out there. I hpe you find the good kind and find one that does not requier a test. A Hug from an Old EMT.

rm_bigchoklatdk 45M

2/2/2006 12:30 pm

Ok Amy........come to daddy and tell me who hurt your feelings....... I can shoot his nutts off!! Holla.

rm_VoodooGuru1 49M
2053 posts
2/2/2006 10:21 pm

Means nothing in particular to me, but I like it. The violence comes suddenly, furiously, and shockingly.

This is not to say I'm some pasty, Fangoria-reading sicko; merely that when art makes me feel, it's good.

bulging_boy 49M

2/3/2006 4:10 am

Amy for what it's worth...

I can vouch for the person you feel slighted you.

I can tell you that this person has feelings and integrity beyond reproach.

I can tell you that what you were subjected to was wrong, and shouldn't have happened.

I can tell you that innocent people are always caught in the crossfire.

I can tell you, that the person you grew fond of is worth that.

I can tell you lots of things... but I'd really love for you to give him a chance

rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
2/3/2006 11:55 am

I have know betrayal. Your words speak the truth. By the time we realize what has just happened we are awash in the blood our of crippled love. You have captured the essence of what it feels like to have been murdered by the one person who was never suppose to hurt you. The person who was suppose to protect you.
Sorry about what happened, but through pain has arisen beauty.

LIBlonde97 40F
1028 posts
2/3/2006 1:10 pm

From one Amy to another...

Bulge is telling the truth, and I know the real story too. Things aren't what they seem; it wasnt him, you were mislead by someone who is definitely troubled. I only hope for your sake you give him a chance to explain... he cares about you so much... does nothing but rave about you to me.

Good luck with everything, and I'm sorry someone put you through so much anguish. The whole entire situation really is horrible.



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