# A Wish #  

rag69doll 62F
27 posts
6/9/2006 5:42 am

Last Read:
7/20/2009 1:51 pm

# A Wish #

I lie on the ground,
and stare into space,
the stars start to move,
into the shape of your face.

I see you there now,
looking down at me,
with that cute little smile,
that I like to see.

You say "close your eyes",
"tell me what you see",
I see only two people,
just you and me.

We're walking the shoreline,
with our feet getting wet,
the horizon turns pink,
as the sun starts to set.

We make love through the night,
on that white sandy shore,
then I hold you while thinking,
I could want nothing more.

Oh I wish I could be,
in that one special place,
as I lie on the ground,
and I stare into space..

~~ TheSoftOne ~~



rm_NJSailor1955 61M

6/11/2006 12:58 pm

Hey Ragdoll. You write well. Your poetry is soft, enticing and very romantic. It's nice to see. Romance seems to be a thing of the past, and that is very said.

Keep writing for us.

Thanks. Sailor


rag69doll 62F

6/12/2006 3:21 pm

Thank you so much! Sailor..

I'm very fond of poems, and really a true romantic Woman. Still believe in the good and "old" values in life. Love reading about the great and ancient Philosophers.

Most kindly TheSoftWoman


hiper23 57M

6/14/2006 12:31 pm

I liked of your poetry. You write well and put a little part of your soul. I think what you are adorable. You speak about love, trues, romance, life... This is present. A really gift. Thank you.


rag69doll replies on 10/2/2006 4:06 am:
Thank you so much for your comment!

Have a lovely day!

rm_BigBear_66 50M
16 posts
6/20/2006 7:32 pm

Many nice poems in your blog rag69doll. Romantic, dreamy, sensuous. They remind me of what I miss from being in love. Thanks for the reminder, keep up the good work.

Your values are yours and not in any way "old", and it would be disrespectful to put them down. Besides it takes more effort to do it this way than to be plain and vulgar, and in my opinion it's much more interesting.


rag69doll replies on 10/2/2006 4:07 am:
Thank you, BigBear!

Nice to get comments from what one loves, as I do poems.

Have a great day!

SirMounts 102M

10/2/2006 11:06 am

rag69doll...
My, your unique and pleasing talent shines through, with everything that you write. *smiling*


rag69doll replies on 10/4/2006 1:33 pm:
Thank you, my great Friend!

Always a pleasure hearing from you.

Wish you a sweet Evening!

rm_NJSailor1955 61M

10/11/2006 10:37 pm

Hey Rag Doll. E-mail me. We need to talk.


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