plateaufellow 43M
2 posts
12/12/2005 12:51 pm

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RodTender 46M
140 posts
12/12/2005 1:05 pm

Overall, a solid B-. Content was clear and concise, but narrative structure is lacking.

wombat_ 49M

12/12/2005 1:30 pm

I would be less forgiving. Whilst creative and very "artistic" it lacks some basic grammar principles. Had you written "Test." and used punctuation and capitalisation maybe a C but sadly all I can grant is a D-

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