ripped soul  

paulabear1 43F
32 posts
8/20/2005 11:49 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

ripped soul

my skin is hot for a touch
any touch
begging for a god to rain his wrath upon me
abusefrom peasents i can deal with
but you forsaking me has torn my body and soul asunder
have left me rotting away with despair
i am forsaken
taken from my walls of safety
and left weak and trembling before your judgement
i have been found unworthy
i have been found lacking
i have been thrown away, discarded like nothing more than a old worn rag
i am begging for your forgiveness
i am pleading for your completion
but it will not be
for he has decreed me wanting
but for what
tell me so i can find it
so i can repair the rip in my soul

paulabear1 43F

8/20/2005 1:34 pm

thank you.

NickRules999 39M
9462 posts
8/20/2005 8:13 pm

Great poem. I can relate with it.

Come into my realm! You aren't afraid...are you?

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