and another.....  

one_hot_brownie1 37F
18 posts
9/8/2006 9:33 am

Last Read:
10/15/2006 5:55 am

and another.....

Forbearing as I sit
Awaiting your arrival.
Will you show or no?
I need you for survival.
I want you to take me.
Right here, right now.
So, this is my plea..
With you , I'm like wow!
I feel like Marilyn Monroe.
Let's have a go at it.
Go lickety split,
On my clit.

rm_2wild4u12 37M/37F
3 posts
9/9/2006 3:36 pm

I like the way this one ends ; )

rm_wncn06 43M
3 posts
9/9/2006 6:10 pm


I can honestly say, that is the first blog that I have written that has gotten me worked up like that. Seriously. And it did not even hit me at first. Your writing style changed so much yesterday. 2 posts yesterday alone, yet, they were not the same super descriptive portrayal of each and every sense experienced, or fantasized about. I can't tell if your older writings are reflections of a past event, not necessarily on the que, but based on - or - one of the most vivid imaginations to hit a keyboard. If they were the later, I do not know how that could ever be written in one sitting, without a personal satisfaction break, that is.

Your newer posts, both from yesterday, are straight poetry. I do think that all writings, all communication, all visuals, just about everything in the world, is poetry, but this is straight poetry. These are two VERY different styles, both extroardinarily wild in their own rights. But the straight poetry, is from a more comfortable standpoint, they have a calmness, they have an understanding, to them. That sense is one that allows all of us that read them, to take your points, your raw emotions, and put them into our own descriptive settings. You have allowed us to relate to your raw energy much more this way. You have allowed us to feel you, your thoughts, your mind, and your arrousal in our heads, with our settings, with our desires. The culmination of a reader and the poet in this way is one of the most amazing forms of sharing known to man. This is what I was referring to in my profile by real.

Truth, Real, is a calming, comfortable, almost silent state when everything is in tune. What this type of poetry does is share this truth, share this real, and from me to you, I thank you for sharing, in both forms!!!

Don't get me wrong, the descriptive style takes the reader, and it certainly did this to me, through a complete scene, just like a ride at a park, or the scene you portrayed on your blog header
- get in
- sit down
- shut up
- and hold on
(same theory right?)
This is truly an amazing experience. All the work is done, and it is just 100% pleasure, and there is no doubt that these posts brought a lot of pleasure to a lot of people.

Keep writing, keep fantasizing, keep SHARING!!!


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