I can feel u .....  

mystery4ulove 39F
53 posts
6/6/2006 1:29 am

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6/29/2006 2:51 am

I can feel u .....

You're far away,
but, I can feel you.
You exist in my every breath,
in every beat of my heart,
adding a spectacular sizzle
in all the right places.
Even when I close my eyes,
I see your face and feel
the fire of your caress.
Your presence is a tangible thing...
yet as hard to grasp as the air.
I reach for you,
but you elude me.
Still, I can feel you;
the softness of a petal,
a warm wind on my cheek,
a ray in my vision,
a distant light that
ever draws me near.

rm_gr8inbed1972 44M
18 posts
6/6/2006 1:49 am

that is a very nice piece... i feel like that at times myself

rm_solystis 70M
167 posts
6/6/2006 2:05 am

good writing

maxititer 47M
4 posts
6/6/2006 7:26 pm

You lovely person and lonely sametime. It should not be that way. I have seen life and tell you many things you dont know.

jayhoo74 42M
9 posts
6/11/2006 11:24 pm

Feellike penning down some beautiful words that rhymes but I can't.Wish to enjoy that droping down your pen........

rm_avid_airwind 35M

6/14/2006 5:17 pm

Must appreciate your thoughts & personality. Philosophical yet passionate. Wild yet sensible. If you are true to the diverse articles you put in your blog, I am sure you must be a treasure for your acquanitances. It is rare to find people with ability to think, feel & express all around thoughts... Keep it up!

SirMounts 102M

6/16/2006 5:57 am

Well, I guess I can have that effect on a girl. *admiring self in mirror* lol
Welcome to blogging, mystery4ulove. *smiling*

sinistersam88 48M

6/27/2006 11:11 pm

You are a good poetess Mystery.

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