You Took My Breath Away  

mysteriesofme 44F
253 posts
2/20/2006 7:58 am

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4/10/2006 10:25 am

You Took My Breath Away

No longer a fantasy.. it's a dream.

For a fantasy is defined
'as something people believe in that is false'

it's a dream.... for I want it to come true
the one I had, last night of you

I took a plane and met some friends
invited you along, you brought your bestfriend

I hung out with the "past", until I let it go
then you asked me, just where I wanted to go?

"Take me to the ocean, I'm ready for the waves"

You did.. and I just couldn't wait

I stripped off these clothes, (you saw it all anyway)

I couldn't wait, another moment or another day
To dive right in and float away

On waves of salt
God's tears over broken hearts

Washing me clean, to seeing Future dreams

I heard your dive
It brought me to my feet
you were coming in, after me

A panic'd look to the sands
I saw some more clothes (Oh my GOD!)
brought me to my feet as waters upon shores

I was shaking, for I wasn't prepared
I had forgotten for a moment that you were even there (sorry)

As you came out of the water
I was FULLY aware
that a Man, was standing before me then and there

he grabbed me
as water danced us upon time
stars all around
sparkling this moment: "sublime"

it couldn't of been more natural
as I lifted my feet off the ground
once again the waves floated me up
until I came down

I don't even think he was prepared
for the two, that became one, then and there
for the fearful look in our eyes that eventually rolled back
it wasn't no game or prethought act

we were just there for the ride
and then joined right in
when the surf-boards of feelings
began to set in

the waves...

we prayed to in the past
the fact it happened there
brings head shakes of laughs

as my eyes open to see a new day

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Origonal Picture is a Jim Warren

Song of Post - Dance Trance Dido "You take my breath away" -DJ Tiesto Vocal Mix



mysteriesofme 44F

2/20/2006 9:30 am

glad you liked it - and feel free to pop in anytime...

...I'm just hoping.. the right person pop's in your blog - can't wait to read that.


rm_gulmunthos 30M
105 posts
2/20/2006 10:01 am

oooh.. very nice.. mm.. sounds and smells of the waves, soft touches, nice feelings.. very good..


aascrompn 42M
6444 posts
2/20/2006 10:05 am

I liked this post a lot! Great work...


mysteriesofme 44F

2/20/2006 11:07 am

asscrompn - it wasn't "work" at all.. and welcome... to my emotions


mysteriesofme 44F

2/20/2006 11:18 am

gulmunthos - it is.. very... nice


KC_JJ 54M

2/20/2006 4:57 pm

Hey baby grace,

Did you really dream this?

Have you ever taken what was on your mind as you were falling to sleep straight into the dream world? I think I did that last night.

Also I tend to hate poetry too which makes the fact that I've actually been writing some lately stranger than most people realize.

I think you did notice though when I started posting "out of character" like that.

So how's the Amamzon women group going? I do hope some bona fide Orinoco chicks join up.

MMM [ MMM


mysteriesofme 44F

2/20/2006 7:10 pm

Yes I did... I wouldn't of.. allowed it to go on- awake. I thought it was actually happening.. my dreams are pretty real.. at times. I sometimes wake up and think.. DAMN..!! lol (thinking I'm back in North Carolina or Arizona.. still with the friends.. etc) But, I don't think I would of ever connect what I did, awake.. giggling

your poetry.. yeah.. I was floored you could write.. lol

Amazon women.. oh oh.. haven't had time - haven't checked.. I think if it isn't still me, myself, and I - they'll hunt me down and hang me.. lol -if not now eventually...


silentshouting 56M

2/21/2006 7:14 pm

Grace,

I think you need to find your way back to the ocean. I see someone lying there naked, basking in the warm sun; waiting for you to come.

James Taylor lyrics
"James Taylor Carolina In My Mind lyrics"

In my mind I’m goin’ to carolina
Can’t you see the sunshine
Can’t you just feel the moonshine
Maybe just like a friend of mine
It hit me from behind
Yes I’m goin’ to carolina in my mind

Karen she’s a silver sun
You best walk her way and watch it shinin’
Watch her watch the mornin’ come
A silver tear appearing now I’m cryin’
Ain’t I goin’ to carolina in my mind

There ain’t no doubt it no ones mind
That loves the finest thing around
Whisper something warm and kind
And hey babe the sky’s on fire, I’m dyin’
Ain’t I goin’ to carolina in my mind

In my mind I’m goin’ to carolina
Can’t you see the sunshine
Can’t you just feel the moonshine
Maybe just like a friend of mine
It hit me from behind
Yes I’m goin’ to carolina in my mind

Dark and silent last night
I think I might have heard the highway calling
Geese in flight and dogs that bite
Signs that might be omens say I going, going
I’m goin’ to carolina in my mind

With a holy host of others standing ’round me
Still I’m on the dark side of the moon
And it seems like it goes on like this forever
You must forgive me
If I’m up and gone to carolina in my mind

In my mind I’m goin’ to carolina
Can’t you see the sunshine
Can’t you just feel the moonshine
Maybe just like a friend of mine
It hit me from behind
Yes I’m goin’ to carolina in my mind


mysteriesofme 44F

2/21/2006 10:27 pm

I've love that song.. I also like the one by Fleetwood Mac about Caroline.. the name escapes me..


_King_Cobb_ 54M
25396 posts
5/8/2008 9:56 am

Funny that that guy would quite James Taylor and he's indeed who Carly was married to for awhile.

I just wonder if this post is about me?

I gueas I am that vain !


insert exploding bomb image here


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