One of mine  

mr_cream_jeans 50M
1 posts
7/10/2006 10:48 pm

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7/10/2006 10:52 pm

One of mine

K, here's a song I'm working on, says a lot about my feelings. just can't seem to find the key to get it done though. Everything will be alright in the end. If not, it's not the end!

Ride On

The memories are fading
and only the pain remains.
He locked a door inside of him
'cause love is wild
and can't be tamed.

The path he chose to follow
he knew and understood.
He rode it hard into the wind
to follow
where it would.

He came upon a crossroads
another traveler block his path.
"I carry a heavy load", he said
she looked at him
and laughed.

(she said)
"the other side of a sunrise
the sun sets and the day is done.
When you awaken from the dreams you have
a new journey's
just begun."

(he said)
"I'm riding"
(ride on)
"the wild ride
I want you along

I'm riding"
(ride on)
"the wild ride
come on along."

As the waves broke over their bodies
the wind let out a sigh
thunderheads were rolling
and lightning
streaked the sky

And the sparks turned into fire
drove a train into the night
throttle left wide open
they ignored the
caution light...

Well, that's it so far. I feel it's going along the lines of "take another chance, and get burned again" but I want to finish it more like "its the journey, not the destination."

Please don't add any suggestions on the song itself, not yet. I want it to be from my own heart. I may ask for input on wording ideas later though.

Scotty out...


rm_sexxikritter 52F
2715 posts
7/30/2006 11:20 pm

Hi Scotty,
This is good. I especially like this verse:
And the sparks turned into fire
drove a train into the night
throttle left wide open
they ignored the
caution light...

I would like to see your finished version, if it is finished.

Peace, Kritter


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