Sonnet That Keeps Me From Sleeping Soundly  

mjtrcc 53M
93 posts
3/29/2006 9:23 pm

Last Read:
4/5/2006 5:00 pm

Sonnet That Keeps Me From Sleeping Soundly

I turn to leave, you beg me not to go
Entwine yourself in me and kiss me deep.
Your mouth, your breath inflame me and you know
That though we go to bed, we will not sleep.
My hands explore your curves, but you know what
You want, and are too long denied.
My tongue and fingers play, your legs squeeze shut
In rapture that takes minutes to subside.
And while I kiss your sex in gentle mode
You take me in your mouth, I can't resist
Your passion, in mere moments I explode
And drain myself in waves that won't subsist.
Exhausted, glistening, dozing on my chest,
My luscious angel, you have earned your rest.


Holly_Would 105F

3/29/2006 10:35 pm

I enjoyed this very much...I love moments like you have described here!


mjtrcc 53M

3/30/2006 3:53 am

Thank you. It's the first time I've tried erotic poetry, and my first lesson is that a sonnet doesn't leave much time for details. It's like the poetry version of a quickie .

Thank you very much for stopping by


softnlush 53F

3/30/2006 4:23 am

I absolutely love the images this brought to mind,thank you for writing it and thank you for sharing it

~~~snl~~~


rm_bucfannn 61M/60F
2110 posts
3/30/2006 4:34 am

*siiiiiiiiiiigh*

Very nice...


mjtrcc 53M

3/30/2006 4:58 am

    Quoting softnlush:
    I absolutely love the images this brought to mind,thank you for writing it and thank you for sharing it

    ~~~snl~~~
I'm pleased that you enjoyed the images. Maybe I'll try another one. If I do, I'll be sure to share it.


mjtrcc 53M

3/30/2006 5:02 am

From you, high praise indeed.


sexxxylatina69 41F

3/30/2006 8:56 am

mmmmm, muy caliente.
i like.


mjtrcc 53M

3/30/2006 11:54 am

Gracias. Eres muy caliente tambien companera.

Thanks for stopping by.


piamatter 44F

3/30/2006 12:21 pm

Reminds me of my gym locker number


mjtrcc 53M

3/30/2006 3:26 pm

    Quoting piamatter:
    Reminds me of my gym locker number
I do like that particular locker...


AltumHunksUnite 53M

3/30/2006 7:49 pm

Looks like we have a new poet on the blogs.

Let me drive. I like the view


softnlush 53F

3/30/2006 9:05 pm

yes we do

~~~snl~~~


mjtrcc 53M

3/31/2006 4:20 am

I hesitate even to use the term so soon after the much lamented departure of poetman, whose shoes I am quite unworthy to fill, but thanks.


mjtrcc 53M

3/31/2006 4:37 am

Sonnet Lamenting My Visit with the Muses elsewhere on this blog is about the Muses not coming around much anymore.

and as snl proves in The Fantasy, it's all about having the right muse.


heavensent1123 52F

4/1/2006 6:36 am

batting my eyelashes coyly, did you mention an angel 0


heavensent1123 52F

4/1/2006 6:37 am

damn, it's just one of those days : : :


heavensent1123 52F

4/1/2006 6:39 am

or even , going back to bed and starting all over again when I wake up, computer dyslexic today


mjtrcc 53M

4/1/2006 12:33 pm

    Quoting heavensent1123:
    or even , going back to bed and starting all over again when I wake up, computer dyslexic today
Actually, given the theme of the sonnet, maybe scuba man is more appropriate? LOL

New friends, a muse and now an angel? How lucky can a guy get?


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