mdchica83 33F
17 posts
8/6/2006 8:51 pm

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12/23/2006 3:35 pm


I found this poem I wrote about three years ago. When I was younger, I had the idea that I'd wait to have sex until I was married. That goal immediately became a distant thought when I was sixteen. I love men way too much to wait until marriage to give into my the demands of my hormones. I met this guy who completely dispelled the notion of waiting and this poem is all about him. Enjoy

I always said I'd wait.
Wait for the one man that makes my heart sing.
But then I met you and that wait seems like a
faint, distant thought.
My body and mind say now.
Now I crave to feel you inside;
making me burn and praise heaven for someone like you.
When you whisper those dirty words in my hears, waiting seems so wrong.
Why not now?
Why not kiss what my mouth years to make burst?
Why not feel deep inside me what makes me moan and tremble right now?
Waiting is so long.
Right now is what I want and crave to have.

rm_John69M4U 69M
135 posts
8/11/2006 3:29 am

Trish, I Like it. I'm Glad you decided Not to wait


DustyF 38M

8/12/2006 9:04 pm

Those are some strong emotions you're revealing. Have you felt that way lately? Because I hope the guy appreciates it.

rm_Jbax29388 35M

12/23/2006 4:53 am

thats a very cool poem, keep writing would love to hear more.

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