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rm_lyinghere 39M
158 posts
7/17/2005 1:21 am

Last Read:
11/7/2011 10:07 am

[ .lyinghere. ]

[ .lyinghere. ]

am the king and down baby
every run
every a.m. shining
my hands work out the last ones
laying at me feet
small to frail
my incomprehensible steam
where anger only fills us

burning now to down baby
executables on my marker
holding out for my little ones
just till they come
and we go down again
the never ending run shot
timed out to our percision gasps

but its all selling out baby
this all my shaking time
doubt anyone's here
doubt anyone's hearing this
doubt all my little scrabblings
here my shadow turns out
against the coming
of your twisted face again

© BMc July 10, 2005 10:42am
some recent work,
I have tons more.
+laine+
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Claudette33 106M/106F

7/17/2005 4:57 am

I like your writing, but I don't get it. ):


rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
7/17/2005 5:54 am

wow! powerful stuff -- this IS NOT just endless repetition!



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pussnboots694 73M/78F

7/17/2005 7:33 pm

beautful..
wrapped in code..
I do hope you find my version as deeply moving.
alas there is not enough hours again..
I will post soon..


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