[ .late.nite.leaking. ]  

rm_lyinghere 39M
158 posts
8/2/2006 9:35 pm

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[ .late.nite.leaking. ]

[ .late.nite.leaking. ]

its late nite
still leaking
and no words
are coming out
thoughts all gone
like breath and wind
and I cannot stop shaking

four am
making it harder
just can't rest
when so many others
need holding up
to keep us all in place
for just one more moment
outside your hands
that know no bounds

© Bryan McLean July 29 2006

rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
8/3/2006 12:27 pm

your main concern in the last few poems seems to be your caring for others and you not sleeping ... i hope you are not over-extending yourself ...

otherwise, i'd love to see you at A baby blog party!! ...

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rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
8/8/2006 5:10 am

hey again. thanks for always putting up such lovely poetry. however, i probably won't be in for a while, as i'm taking a blog break, hope to still find you around when i get back!!

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rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
9/20/2006 1:47 pm

    Quoting rm_lyinghere:
    I rarely sleep, lovely..
    too many things to do, and when I sleep, I'm still working..
    shamans work when we dream..

    but thats me.. all I care about prolly...
    night is my time..
    I'm not a day person..
LOL! as a dreamer/writer i am definitely a night person, but as the mother of a toddler, i have to take the hit and be a day person

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