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Lying hear alone, staring through my lonely night,
I find my mind is playing with ideas I cannot fight.
My skin begins to tingle, where my hands begin to touch,
Drawn into the warm invite that beckons from my crotch.
I know no one can hear me when the moan escapes my lips,
No one can see me lick my sweet cum covered fingertips.
And pinching on my nipples makes me quiver, makes me twitch,
I writhe and buck my hips alone, a wasted horny quitch.
I long to feel the kiss of tongues pushing deep inside,
Then gently dancing upon lips, teasing, opening wide.
I imagine feeling hot breath falling on my flesh,
That first taste of some one else's dew so hot and fresh.
I slowly push my digits into my eager pussy;
Biting on my lip and groaning like aa eager hussy.
Sprawled across the bed I push my ass into the air,
One hand working wonders, the other pulling hair.
Then the burn begins, slowly starting from the clit,
In the dark I smile and tease the juice along my slit.
The muscles deep inside begin to tighten up my hole,
I know that soon I will be losing more than just control.
My breathing now much shorter, I spoil my selfish cunt,
Alone I find my pleasure in a wet and breathless hunt.
Rolling on my side I hug my hands in damp warm thighs,
And listen to my lonely night's self-satisfying sighs
8/22/2006 6:50 pm
mm pretty good as it was self satisfaction .no not too wordy but we could debate a few words but that is being petty..very sensual..very honest..very erotic but what was missing was the reason..the thoughts which drove the play..was action..descriptive..very good descriptive but missed that touch of depth of cause..lol..heheh being the typical critic loved it lol..more more encore encore|
12/29/2006 10:05 pm
dammmmmmmmm that was a nice vision.. but would be better if it was me pleasing you..|
very descriptive and sensual.. keep up the great work