poem 1  

lilsexycowgirl 31F
12 posts
12/12/2005 7:34 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

poem 1

City Born, Country raised, 8 second ride, can u survive? Can u take the HEAT of a 2000 lbs BULL? Can hold on for dear life? Can u look back and notice that everyday can end so short? Do u live life like as if you were dying???


What is this feeling?

What is this feeling I am feeling tonight?

The feeling of not wanting to wait another night.

The feeling of not having you in my sight.

What is this feeling i feel everday?

I feel happy and glamours in a way.

And one day, I came to say.....

I wanna be the one you touch

I wanna be the one you hold

I wanna be theone and only told the secrets of your life and keep them whole.

What is the feelings i feel during the day?

The feelings of you being away..

Makes my heart want to decay.

But I know I will be okay.

Just as long as you will say:

"That you will stay another day".

madpoet616 62M
1 post
12/12/2005 8:06 pm

Not bad, young one! So many of the poems I have read here I couldn't even finish. Yours has a begining, a middle and an end,
I noticed you did not use the word "IT", very good. Only lazy writers use that most useless word. Keep up the good work you
will only get better.

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