poem (so if your not into it then skip this post)  

lenore00 33F
118 posts
6/9/2005 12:57 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

poem (so if your not into it then skip this post)

Yes, I wrote this myself:

You take me up, but I hold myself down
without knowing my true identity
Ive left you with nothing, yet you deny me still
the same changes I keep makeing, but you still cant see me clear.
Im not meant to be your doll, on a shelf when you need.
Im showing you the truth, Only thing is you dont belive me.
So im gonna tell you, but one last time
You pushed me away, you never let me lead
Im unable to feel the guilt.
No pain I will feel, thinking you will change
Im off, im gone, and still just a charcter in your mind.


GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
6/9/2005 2:36 pm

Very nice poem

Sounds like he wasn't worth all you have to give ...

.... rereading ....

lenore00 33F

6/9/2005 8:07 pm

Thank you!
Its not for anyone, I just write things.


rm_little_gurl 32F
7 posts
6/12/2005 10:19 am

nice poem... since u left me a comment ill leave you one.. yeah i know a ton of middle aged - old pervs are gona write me.. but ya know what ill just erase those, like usual. its been a while since i signed up here i jus havent been on in a while. so my inital mailbox full of messages from those guys have died down. and ur whole thing about my blog shouldnt be a diary but more of a journal...tbats the same thing! anywayz enough of this u seem like a cool person from what ive read and like i said...i liked ur poem. u should write more

AmberSolaire 42M

6/12/2005 5:28 pm

From one amber to another.That poem bites back.I can feel it.

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