More than a Moment  

l_jadeblooming 41F
13 posts
1/8/2006 11:03 pm

Last Read:
3/29/2006 1:09 pm

More than a Moment

The loneliness is finally allowed presence
when I finally get to have more than a moment
to myself

Sitting at this computer
looking at pictures
wishing for a strong pair of arms
to fall into
when I don't feel so strong

Sitting here
avoiding going to bed alone again
waiting to be tired enough
not to care
so I can get up
and stay busy
until I get more than a moment for myself
allowing the loneliness to show its presence

xix12345 35M
53 posts
1/9/2006 1:00 am

Reading our your poem
Nothing can I do
You seem so warm and fragile
Who wouldnt be into you?

Lying in your bet at night
feeling all alone
all you need to do is write
Or go pick up the phone

, cant say im the best poet in the world, but I hope that put a smile on your face.

Ill watch your blog and see if I can put some more smiles on your face, but your more than welcome to post away on my blog 2

Hope all is well


rm_putitinu73 42M
2 posts
1/30/2006 10:55 am


This poem is excellent!! for those that have never been there would only have an idea. if you have been there, then you know the thoughts and feelings that go in to the thought process of this poem. Great poem and would love to hear more.


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