interested13563 53M
985 posts
6/20/2005 1:07 pm

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10/12/2008 5:53 pm


The moment I found her she vanished.
The extra dimension that contained her
curled up into itself,
compactified to near nothingness.
I endlessly walked
along its one-sided twisted ribbon
searching for the other side
- an insect trapped in a pointless exercise.
She vanished from letters, from messages,
from images
as though she preferred not to be.
When the day broke, she sent a soft ray
through the morning emerald - her last word,
and was consumed by light, absorbed by silence,
not to be - for me.

Copyright 2005 by interested13563

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
6/20/2005 3:06 pm

At least you shared that eternal moment...

what a sad yet beautiful picture you paint

playfulwithyou33 56F
961 posts
6/21/2005 2:51 am

Aw, poor baby! Fortunately the world is FULL of lovely experiences (women), I'm certain another is on the horizon.

GleesFlakyShawl 50M
1620 posts
6/21/2005 6:31 am

very touching, the pain is so palpable, so real
memories help to define who we are

interested13563 53M
2557 posts
6/21/2005 10:23 am

Indeed Goddess, some moments are eternal.
And playfull, thanks - women are wondeful
experiences if only by virtue of being there.
Thanks for all the comments.

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