UNFINISHED  

interested13563 53M
985 posts
3/17/2006 2:44 pm

Last Read:
5/11/2006 10:17 pm

UNFINISHED


Dry and barren scape.
An exploding small sun
contesting time.
Dusty steps on scorched land,
my steps that will not compete.
A deep cello sound
mixed with hoarse wind:
"Oh, you faithful,
look at what you have done!"
The book has more pages,
most are blank.
I follow no steps.
I leave no traces behind.
I keep walking.


Copyright 2006 by interested13563


rm_meow344 105F
2615 posts
3/17/2006 9:54 pm

The book has more pages,
most are blank.
With this line,you say more then you have written.
Wounderful.. I love the depth leaving one but to
guess..At the same time feeling as if they know..
lovely..


papyrina 50F
21133 posts
3/18/2006 7:23 am

all those pages you still have to fill with new and differant things and experiances


I'm a

and
i'm here to stay


rm_Kissmystuff 61F
1435 posts
3/18/2006 3:56 pm

A very lonely feeling..

Thanks again for the beautiful prose.

Kiss


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

3/18/2006 5:50 pm

I absolutely loved this !

{=}


interested13563 53M
2557 posts
3/21/2006 12:57 pm

Meow, you are right in your understanding.
Thanks for the nice comment!

Papy, thank for reading. I do imply that
there can be more experiences even
in a baren world. There is some hope
in this pessimism!

Kiss, ideed it is a lonely feeling.

Huntress, I really appreciate your dropping
by and reading!


tillerbabe 55F

3/22/2006 4:10 pm

blank pages....GOODIE!!! more to scribble on!


rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
3/23/2006 12:05 am

hope you have some seeds in your pocket



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