THE CELIBATE ORNITHOLOGIST  

interested13563 53M
985 posts
4/13/2006 2:55 pm

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5/9/2006 4:03 pm

THE CELIBATE ORNITHOLOGIST


I have no one to kill.
What a pity!
You would say,
what is the difference
of a hen?
I am writing to deny
my story.
Yes, I would answer,
exit but where from?


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An "avant-guard" poem for those
to be amused or be thoughtful.

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Copyright 2006 by interested13563


keithcancook 60M
17718 posts
4/14/2006 7:24 am

From the egg, perhaps?

Or maybe from stage left...


interested13563 replies on 4/14/2006 8:45 am:
Thanks for visiting, Keith!!!

rm_PurryKitty2 48M/49F
9753 posts
4/14/2006 8:58 am

Perplexed!

Purry {=}

Purry


interested13563 replies on 4/14/2006 12:01 pm:
so am i!!!!

__Huntress__ 55M/57F

4/15/2006 4:41 am

I would have liked to have been inside your head to see the road this entry took. That would be fascinating.

{=}


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

4/15/2006 4:45 am

You must do one favor for me. As I look here, I see that you have not posted any of the verse written in response to mine. Please, please do that. If not for any other reason, but that those that come to visit your blog will be able to more fully share the brilliance that I have found in yours !

{=}


interested13563 replies on 4/15/2006 2:09 pm:
All right! In order to honor you and your blog
I will post some of those poems. I have reworked
them but they are not my best. Thanks for showing
this confidence in my scriblings!!!!!

papyrina 50F
21133 posts
4/15/2006 1:19 pm

you confused me again


I'm a

and
i'm here to stay


interested13563 replies on 4/15/2006 2:11 pm:
Well, this is supposed to happen.
When the author is obscure (or
confused) the reader can only guess!!!

rm_Kissmystuff 61F
1435 posts
4/16/2006 5:49 am

Perhaps he has repented
the many dried
and marrow leeched bones
left upon forgotten platters.
A vegetarian now..
he's moved on.
No more his need..
of the feathered bodies of
the clucking creatures.
Their fear is focused
on another now.
So they take no notice
of his silent exit.

Kiss

Kiss


interested13563 replies on 4/16/2006 12:04 pm:
Not really. The emphasis here is on asking a question
that does not make sense and yet it does. But what is
more important is the result of the interaction between
the poem and the reader who is free to make her own
associations!

interested13563 replies on 4/16/2006 12:04 pm:
Not really. The emphasis here is on asking a question
that does not make sense and yet it does. But what is
more important is the result of the interaction between
the poem and the reader who is free to make her own
associations!

rm_meow344 105F
2615 posts
4/17/2006 12:47 am

I love the circles
in which you think..
Moving with form .. yet..
No riddle seen by you
when written.
But one to the reader,
to move thought.
very nice


interested13563 replies on 4/17/2006 3:51 pm:
Thank you miss Meow! Always nice to have your comments!!!

rm_Kissmystuff 61F
1435 posts
4/21/2006 10:24 am

"the reader who is free to make her own
associations!"

EXACTLY!!! And since I'm working at becoming a vegetarian..that's my interpretation. So there!

Kiss

Kiss


interested13563 replies on 4/21/2006 11:56 am:
Perfectly fine!!!!

rm_goddess1946 105F
13518 posts
4/22/2006 5:32 pm

I have really enjoyed reading you..
just want you to know that because it is truth


Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...
{=}


interested13563 replies on 4/25/2006 9:52 am:
Thank you so much for reading
and for you nice and encouraging
comment!!!

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