interested13563 53M
985 posts
3/15/2006 4:13 pm

Last Read:
5/9/2006 4:06 pm


Elegant in its simplicity,
magnificent in its silence
night is pouring in.
Music emanating from the quietness,
notes in the shape of frame-less volumes,
a relief of darkness,
a symphony of lightlessness.
Sharp like broken glass
is darkness to the eye,
whipping the stillness,
dripping from the eyes into the chest,
reaching the fingertips.
The would-be sounds vibrate internally,
a pulsating life.
You, a protrusion of earth
likening a ground's wrinkle.
You shuffle your steps
touching traces of light
left on the rocks - a hard, cold touch.
Homogeneity inside and outside the skin,
fragile as its juices dry out,
a flow of soundlessness
absorbed by the stone.
Heat is retreating
and the taste in your mouth
is rough, soil-full.

Copyright 2006 by interested13563

KarezzaMagick 64M
165 posts
3/15/2006 6:26 pm

Very nice.

Are you familiar with Robin Frederick?
She has a song called "Blue Flame," which you can hear in full at her website, which is her name w/out the space, followed by the usual three-letter suffix. It's on the Reading Room page. But, if you look at her essay on "Love & Longing: the World of Poets and Muses," you can listen to the "Blue Flame" song as you read. Very interesting and inspiring (not to mention beautiful).

rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
3/15/2006 9:37 pm

i looooove this!

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rm_meow344 105F
2615 posts
3/15/2006 10:48 pm

Very well danced, My Friend..Lovely indeed

rm_Kissmystuff 61F
1435 posts
3/17/2006 3:34 pm

This reminds me of the mother earth goddess.
Bringer of life and fertility in the sping..
frolicking and youthful in the summer..
growing maturity of fall..
finally the dying off and silent sleep of winter.
I'm looking forward to the renewal of life again.

Thank you for your beautiful poem.



__Huntress__ 55M/57F

3/18/2006 5:49 pm

Wonderful !


interested13563 53M
2557 posts
3/21/2006 12:53 pm

Free, Karezza, Meow, and Huntress, thank you for reading
and commenting.

Kiss, your assesement gives an intersting anlge to the
the poem! Thanks!

interested13563 53M
2557 posts
3/22/2006 12:58 pm

Thank you, Waggy!!!!

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