interested13563 53M
985 posts
7/29/2005 7:05 pm

Last Read:
5/9/2006 4:30 pm


Listen to the words I am not saying
as I speak, analyse, and reason,
and make a lot of sense.
In those tiny fractions of a second
between nouns and verbs
- my perfectly coherent explanations -
I ruthlessly suppress my agony.
Because I am crushed
just as you are crushed.
Because I need you to be me
just as I crave to be you.
Because I am nothing more than
my own echo in an empty room,
a voiceless sound among
the ordered elements of my mind.

But you will not hear my call
or see the pain under my smile.
You will not dip into my feelings
that secretly spill onto the floor.
Because I am so fucking trustworthy
as I listen to you with empathy.
Because I act so goddamn responsible
as I fence your fears off.
Because you need that friend in me,
the friend who props you up
when you sway or hurt or doubt,
but not the lover who sweeps you
off your feet, dancing you
away into the fiery sunsets
of your imagination.

Copyright 2005 by interested13563

rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
7/30/2005 10:22 am

please don't take this the wrong way, but the blindspot you have here is quite staggering ...! live as you wish to live, not by someone else's requirements ... if you don't you are irresponsible ...!

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interested13563 53M
2557 posts
7/30/2005 3:07 pm

FreeLove: sorry but I do not understand your point and I think
you do not understand the poem either. It does not refer to any
current experience of mine. On the other hand friendship and
love do mean that you have to place some other people above
yourself sometimes. Also the poem touches on anticipation,
sometimes wrogly placed. And as a lyrical poem it focuses on
feelings. If you do not understand this then you are irresponsible.

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
7/30/2005 3:53 pm

sitz back, re-readz ....

and my friend, you know you are so much more than you give yourself credit for, especially here

rm_EE407 41F
3903 posts
7/31/2005 10:03 am

That is truly beautiful. Thanks for sharing...

rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
7/31/2005 11:49 pm

obviously i know that it refers to some time ago ... however, i will email you want i meant ...

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