interested13563 53M
985 posts
9/12/2005 6:51 pm

Last Read:
5/9/2006 4:24 pm


My blue shirt is buffeting in the wind,
the breeze, blowing my heart away.
The sky is falling heavily on the roofs,
it must be sunset somewhere.
Do not cry of sorrow, my cloud,
the world is finished here.

Copyright 2005 by interested13563

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
9/15/2005 12:54 pm

~ hugz ~ to you


bella_ 47F
4030 posts
9/15/2005 5:42 pm

That was simple and much meaning in a few sentences.

interested13563 53M
2557 posts
9/15/2005 7:25 pm

Goddess: Thank you - hugz to you too!
Bella: Thank you for being so nice to me!

rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
9/16/2005 12:02 am

i know that feeling of standing in the wind and feeling things being snatched away -- you have described it beautifully. i always have to read your poems, go away and come back later once it's been effective, to comment...

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AmberSolaire 42M

9/18/2005 8:22 pm

But what about your blue jeans and your blue suede shoes?

interested13563 53M
2557 posts
9/22/2005 8:54 am

Amber: I do not have blue shoes and hardly ever put
on blue jeans! Thanks for reading!

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