My First Atempt at a Poem  

howaboutahuck 65M
227 posts
7/21/2006 7:34 am

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7/27/2006 5:25 am

My First Atempt at a Poem


Star light, star bright
First star I see tonight
I wish I may, I wish I might
Have the wish I wish tonight

I wish to find someone to hold
To be beside me as I get old
I wish to find someone who値l say
They値l stay beside me and never stray

I wish to find someone who値l see
All the true feelings buried inside of me
I wish to find someone who値l take the time
To see what痴 truly on my mind

I wish to find someone who値l care
About all the things I wish to share
I wish to find someone who値l be
Just as willing to share with me

I wish to find someone to love
Who I will never put myself above
I wish to find someone who値l be
No more than an equal to me

Star light, star bright
First star I see tonight
I wish I may, I wish I might
Have the wish I wish tonight

ncfantasyseeker 46F
22 posts
7/21/2006 8:04 am

Good Job..... Keep writing

NC


rm_sexxikritter 52F
2715 posts
7/21/2006 8:40 am

That's a beautiful first attempt, Huck. You did good.
I hope those wishes come true for you.


tracy_de_lacy 105F
9268 posts
7/21/2006 8:53 am

that was nice and just about sums up how I am feeling right now

TRACY
XXX




Bye everyone, it was a blast


sweetSinn2690
2943 posts
7/21/2006 9:51 am

Nice job for a first poem...I like!

xoxo
sweet


Oh WHATEVER BITCHES!


rm_KarmoHunny 54F
888 posts
7/25/2006 10:50 pm

Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!


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