can't you hear me?  

honestandreal30 41F
211 posts
3/23/2006 7:14 pm

Last Read:
4/7/2006 10:37 pm

can't you hear me?

when i need to talk
there is no one around.
when i am ready to
let it out, there
is no one here.

Can't you hear me?
Can't you hear me
screaming for you?
Can't you hear my
pain, my brokeness.

where do i go
where do i turn?
the walls closing
in faster and faster.

can't you hear me?
can't you hear me


seek_u_topia 51M

3/24/2006 7:42 pm

I hear you Honest. I do. Hang in there and know you can contact me.


3/25/2006 12:28 pm

maybe you're just crying to the wrong people.........if you need an ear & a shoulder........let me know........wallowing in it can only worsen your outlook on everything else........take my hand & lets roll!!!!!.......hugs babe.....c-ya

Whispersoftly5 52F
15176 posts
3/25/2006 6:24 pm

Please make sure to vote for the Warden of Punishment for Blogville - See post = [post 284927]

Thanks - Whisper...

P.S. Incredible poem. So cool that you can express yourself that way!

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