Was it you?  

happygirl68 48F
293 posts
6/6/2006 3:56 am

Last Read:
12/9/2006 5:02 am

Was it you?

I thought that I heard you call you out my name
But when i stopped to listen, the noise was the same.

I thought I felt you touch my hand
But when I stopped you were off again.

I thought I saw your face in a sea of unfaceless
But when i stopped to look you were gone to some other place.

These things that happen play tricks with my mind
In some far away place in some other time.

lizard_is_me49 50M

6/6/2006 3:21 pm

That's a very interesting poem. Very melancholy.

normalornaught 34M

6/6/2006 6:50 pm

That is a very creative poem. Was there someone special in mind? It makes me think of special people in our lives and how much they are missed when they are not here everyday.

happygirl68 replies on 6/7/2006 4:53 am:
Thank you for the compliment. No one special in mind. Nice butt by the way.

elysianpleasure 47M

6/7/2006 7:26 pm

Very nice... I liked it...

A different side of you showing...

happygirl68 replies on 6/9/2006 3:24 am:
Glad you liked it. Haven't you figured out there are many sides ?????

SteelyBlueEyes 57M

6/9/2006 1:09 am

All sides of the happy ending girl are SPECTACULAR!... mmm mmm mmmm!.. lol.

happygirl68 replies on 6/9/2006 3:26 am:
What a pleasant surprise . . . Now when do i get to see more sides???

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