Orion Keeps Watch  

greenqueen09 29F
19 posts
8/11/2006 12:23 am

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12/29/2006 1:19 pm

Orion Keeps Watch

All I have to do to create the emotions of this night is think of your image… the lust in your eyes… heat flowing down my waist… waves of passion filling my veins… all I want is you. “You have no idea what I want to do to you sometimes.” Or do I?

The sky, already getting dark, was just what we’d been waiting for; so clear, no clouds, and just a hint of a waxing moon. It was perfect for stargazing. You lay out your big, white blanket over the prickly grass. You sigh as we sit down, a little worn out from our day of biking together. We finally lay down, and gaze into the velvety blanket of stars. We point out constellations to each other; Orion, Gemini, Leo, even the Dippers. I roll onto my right side, facing you now. You’re humming a tune I can’t quite recognize, but once you hit the chorus I begin to sing the words: “Well, there’s nothing I can do, I only wanna be with you. You can call me a fool, but I only wanna be with you.” Hootie really knows his stuff…
I move a little closer to you; your body twitches as I gently drag my fingertips along the nape of your neck. I put one hand behind your head, my fingers entwined within your long hair. You move in to kiss me ever so softly. Your lips feel so good on mine, like the finest silk. I feel your tongue extending from your parted mouth, flesh caressing flesh. I think of your tongue as an acrobatic serpent, always teasing and taunting me to no end, into a frenzy. My heart rate quickens and blood rushes through my body as you massage my neck with your lips… Even thinking about it sends chills down my spine.
Your cold hands slide under my shirt, rubbing my lower back, working your way up to the clasp of my black lace bra. After unhooking it with your left hand, you continue along my back and shoulder blades. Your eager mouth finds my neck again, also working around bra and tank straps to my shoulders and collarbone, kissing and sucking on the sweet smelling skin. You know how much I like this. Soon you return to my lips, slightly nibbling on the bottom. I feel your warm breath as you blow into my ear and I sort of pull away, playfully. You now have that amazing look of passion held in your gaze. Those eyes… they remind me of two beautiful blue ponds, so deep I could swim in them. I feel so hot with you looking at me this way. I want to tease you so much… just to make this last forever.
You lift a hand and place it near my face, tracing my facial features with only feather-like pressure, relaxing all the nervousness out of my body and into the summer night. You press your lips to my forehead and whisper, “You are so beautiful.”
We ease each other out of our clothes, one confining article at a time. I peel off my tank top, you unzip my jeans. I can feel your hardness as I unbuckle your belt. Slipping off your shirt, I run my hands along your stomach and chest ‒ my favorite part. Once we are both naked, we take in the absolute wonder of the human body… Why would anyone want to hide such a unique gift?
You begin at my feet, rubbing them as you had my back. It’s almost too much. You make your way up my shaven calves, tasting of Cool Water and light sweat. You sweep your hands along my inner thighs, my stomach ‒ it gives me chills that just won’t go away… but I don’t mind because I know they come from you.
I take your hand, moving it to my breast. You knead it between your thin fingers rhythmically. Lips finally touch my erect nipples, flicking and licking with tongue; your hand between my legs. I tell you how good you are making me feel as my right hand finds you. I know you’re really enjoying this, as am I.
Suddenly, a cool breeze blows by our sweat-beaded bodies, sending a parade of goose bumps over both of us. We wrap half of the blanket around us, and without another care in the world, you take me. The only sounds are the crickets who sing their summer song, the wind in the trees, and the sounds of our lovemaking.
Afterward, we just lie in each other’s arms, wishing we could capture this moment and keep it alive -- always… Then we fall asleep with only Orion to keep watch over us. G’night, hun. Sleep tight…

rm_caribbeauty 36F

8/11/2006 2:11 am

You have alot on your mind

WonderBOYx83x 33M

8/11/2006 2:36 am

Damn right, u should write a book!!

Thraxar 28M
8 posts
8/11/2006 2:42 am

Not bad add some more detailed descriptions, varied adjectives and the like and I'd swear you were a writer.

rm_PurryKitty2 48M/49F
9753 posts
8/11/2006 3:42 am


Welcome to the blogs ?*

Purry {=}


ZZ_Todd 59M

8/11/2006 7:47 am

Beautiful word picture here! We'll be looking forward to more of your "art"... you've definitely got a wonderful way of expressing yourself.

goodnhung2 31M
22 posts
8/21/2006 1:39 pm

I would love to play out your story with you sometime. This is an awesome piece of writing.

rm_tamerfr8 34M

8/30/2006 7:02 am

yep yep yep i heard that great minds do think alike very good keep up the good work

seeknfriends 43M  
47 posts
10/24/2006 3:05 pm

if you actually are checking up on this.. i find we think more alike than i initially thought

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