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fortunaswm 61M/52F
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7/6/2006 11:07 am

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7/24/2006 5:37 am

Will edit

I was unhappy with the way "I Came For Her - Con't" came out. I felt it turned into a onesided porno flick that was an insult to the one it was written for instead of a sensuous story - as I had intended.
I felt it started nicely and deserves a better ending.
The original is hidden for now and I'll come back and do a rewrite later - as always - I have a lot to learn about writing -
But, for now I have more serious thoughts on my mind and will most likely share for those who have always been kind enough to visit my blog. Thanks to all.

HBowt2 58F

7/7/2006 11:13 am

I'll look forward to reading it...

fortunaswm replies on 7/8/2006 5:55 am:
Love ya my friend

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