five_speed 41M
3250 posts
10/5/2005 1:52 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm


Hey folks, I'm still alive, still well, still pirating internet service.

If all goes as planned, I will have another piece of shadow infraction on deck tomorrow. This new section will get us back into the present of the story and back into the action. I think interest in the story died off when I broke into the history lesson. The last two sections have garnered few views and very few comments.

The ones I have received have been AWESOME. Thank you, ladies, for the compliments and encouragement. I appreciate so much.

Considering much of the past of this story is grounded in our true present, I had hoped to spark a discussion or two. The National ID cards, the RFI chips, the databases, the executive arm of the Department of Homeland Security - all of those are true. They have happened, are happening, or are going to happen by 2008. Apparently very few know or care. I am a little disappointed at the lack of interest in at least that realistic aspect of the story... but it's what ever floats your boat, I reckon.

So we'll see how the response is to the new section tomorrow. If the views and comments remain low, I'll probably drop the story and move to something else. I like writing it, but I also like to know people are interested, and it seems interest has definitely dwindled here. We'll see.

BTW, before I forget: Happy HUMP DAY!

Until next time, I am, and will ever remain,

Affectionately Yours,


rm_DaphneR 58F
7938 posts
10/5/2005 3:34 pm

In my case it's not that I don't care. I've been a national ID card-carrying member for over 20 years now. I just sit back and keep my mouth shut and read.

Have tongue, will use it. Repeatedly.

1586 posts
10/5/2005 5:05 pm

Fivey -

I'm delighted that we've had some news from everyone's favorite internet pirate.

Regarding today's post, I have to say that I just don't say anything about everything I notice. I just store the information for later use. That has served me well on many an occasion.

Maybe that fits into a job description someplace.

I need to look into that...

DefiniteTrouble 50F

10/5/2005 9:39 pm

You know how I feel about your writing. Think I'll just sit here and fondle you for awhile.

(T's being mean to me)

3 days!

(Juan S)
2642 posts
10/5/2005 10:14 pm

5...Personally I enjoy the story, but I kinda want to read the whole thing...
When I get a chance on here...I'm popping back and forth into blogs and trying not to stay on here too long...and then there are those boobage attention breakers...LOL.
So I always wind up coming back and trying to read a little more at a time...
Just thoughts...The story is enjoyable, matter of fact, I may need you to help with a project I have going...If you live through this weekend...LOL...

rm_1hotwahine 63F
21091 posts
10/6/2005 12:20 am

Actually I want to copy, paste and print the whole thing out. that way I can read it like it should be read - from paper. (or at least my version of 'should be read').

We must all collectively figure out what to do with that talent! (Knock it off, DT...I meant the WRITING talent)

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]

DefiniteTrouble 50F

10/6/2005 7:33 am

goddessofbitches 41M/33F

10/6/2005 7:55 am

I am the only one on here willing to admit the truth. I haven't read it yet. SORRY!!! Please forgive me...

At least I'm being honest right??

I just stopped by to see what you were up to. I like taking a few um glances at your photo for my own personal uses. lol

ANYWAYS...since you asked nicely...I'll go back and read your story.


Always The Bitch

five_speed 41M

10/6/2005 10:58 am

Daphne, I understand. I know the ID cards are not a new concept. I am worried over the scope of the new plan and the idea of these databases. There is so much room for abuse here.

DCE, I am sure that will come in handy later down the road after we initiate our plan for global domination.

Jez, that you for the compliment, darlin’. I know the story is scary in parts, but it can’t be helped. That is the way it came out of my head.

DT, I like being fondled. Don’t worry about T being mean to you. I’ll make you forget about it all in roughly 50 hours.

Sizzle, thanks for the encouragement. I am certain I will survive the weekend. Everyone is worried about me, when the truth is that DT is probably the one everbody should really be worried about.

Huny, thank you for dropping by. I understand that it’s tough to get it all in. I have barely been to anyone’s blog this week, (but I am also “borrowing” internet service where and when I can find it. I already got chased off twice this week.) I’ll be by to see you in your blog as soon as I have reliable legal internet access.

Wahine, it is tough to read in sections. Heck, it’s hard to write in sections too! I Don’t have any idea how long the story will be before it is finished. It’s shaping up to be a long one!

Mandy, no forgiveness is needed, my friend. I understand, and I respect your honesty. I hope you enjoy my story even half as much as you seem to like my picture!

* * * * * * * *

Sections 8 and 9 are posted, folks! I appreciate everyone dropping in and letting me know what you think. These two sections may be the last two I get written and posted before I head to Tennessee this weekend. I have more in my head to write, but I expect I will be otherwise occupied and distracted this weekend. I’ll try to get one more section written and posted before I head out. Section 10 promises to be a good one. The rest of the crime scene will be explained, a spectre will rise from Citizen Five’s past.... we might even get to see him whoop some sentinel ass, and if I get really carried away, we might even meet DT’s character in the story. Sound good?

DefiniteTrouble 50F

10/6/2005 4:16 pm

**sticks tongue out at T**

<~~~~needs prayers for the weekend, lol.

Oh! I might get to be a character! Oh! Suspend me from a ceiling! No, wait...I wanna play with the kick-ass toys!

Hmmm...better yet, suspend me from the ceiling and let me play with your toys. **smiles innocently**

rm_talldarkavg1 105M
10172 posts
10/6/2005 6:13 pm

Internet theft? WTF? I am so proud!

[blog talldarkavg1]

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