Can you feel this  

FanErotic6996 56M
917 posts
8/28/2006 12:15 pm

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Can you feel this


My thanks to Precious Orchid Fire from Ice(blogTheOrchidGarden) for allowing me to add this - I have read many touching poems but before now have never added anothers to my blog. Yet this conjured so many feelings and images in my head with an amazing use of words.

My voice is numbed and frozen,
Buried deep within my heart,
Abandoned in a cold abyss, where language may not start.

Yet the furies they are screaming,
A vehement siren song,
A vengeful howl of torment, where words do not belong.

Will you take my biting kisses?
As my fingers scald your skin?
Can you look upon my flaring eyes and see what burns within?

As I rage against your body,
And I strive with all my might,
Can you consume the frenzy, and yet still hold me tight?

Will you embrace the tempest?
As it rampages from my soul?
Can you accept the savagery and not be swallowed whole?

And when the storm is ended,
Can you just let it be?
In the passion of the moment, can you take this from me


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FanErotic6996 56M
1019 posts
8/28/2006 12:19 pm

Still trying to determine how to properly add the link.

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Opals_fire 53F
2982 posts
8/28/2006 5:29 pm

had to print it! thanks for sharing it here to for those of us that might have missed it otherwise!


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