Poetry that I have written!  

fancy_for_you 39F
3003 posts
5/12/2006 2:07 pm

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5/25/2006 4:26 pm

Poetry that I have written!


Here are a few poems I have written and had published. Thought you all might like to read them.

FOR ROBIN
Fourteen years
She's just beginning
Fifteen years
She's already wilting
Unwilling to go on
Unsure her job is done
How can one so young be so old
How can one so warm be so cold
How can life begin and end so quickly
How, how is the question we all ask
How can others judge people without judging themselves first
How can I judge others without judging myself first
Only one soul knows these answers
Only one soul knows all answers
Some refuse HIM
Some use HIM
Yet others seek HIM
HE is the only one that should judge people
For in HIS eyes we are all equal

By Fuzzy
Copyright ©2006

And then this one I wrote not long ago after my grandmother passed away.

The Darkness
Lost in a darkness that only envelopes me,
Trying to find my way of which I can not see!
Lost in a darkness alone and afraid,
Trying to find a way to save myself from me!

By Fuzzy
Copyright ©2006

I have a couple others in the works. Just normally can't write without having my heart really into the subject or unless I am angry as heck. I tend to be 100% focused when I am angry, which is funny cause I would think I couldn't accomplish anything while angry but I do.

Anyways, give me some feed back on my poems.

Fuzzy

~~Fuzzy~~


rm_PurryKitty2 48M/49F
9753 posts
5/12/2006 2:35 pm

You write very well!

Purry {=}

Purry


fancy_for_you 39F
3014 posts
5/25/2006 4:22 pm

Thank you very much. Funny though I can only write so well when I am overly stressed out. Go figure all the great ones were a little nuts huh....maybe I fit in after all.

Fuzzy

~~Fuzzy~~


fancy_for_you 39F
3014 posts
5/25/2006 4:26 pm

    Quoting NaughtyBlonde78:
    Fuzzy, I understand the feeling behind your poem The Darkness. The grief is terrible....and sometimes, we are our own worst enemies.
NB ain't it the truth. Sometimes ya just gotta step back and mentally shake yourself and say snap out of it.

Which I am glad I have friends like you and OC who can flat tell me how it is and make me snap out of it without mentally shaking myself. Besides it looks funny when someone walks in and you are shaking your head all around and saying stop it stop it stop it.....lmao

Fuzzy

~~Fuzzy~~


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