evilgothgirl 51F
326 posts
1/11/2006 7:59 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm


As the rain is falling at my feet
I look you in the eye
You gave me too much pity
To many pretty lies
I thought I loved you
So much I could die

But I’m thinking twice now
I can’t read you anymore
You don’t make sense
If life were a puzzle
I’m not sure you’d fit

I wish I could have made it better
But broken things don’t fix
My broken bones still sting
From the time that I was hit
Your love is rough
Loving you is tough
And I’m not sure I can take it

The rain is falling harder now
It’s starting to sting my toes
Tears rolling down my face
You don’t even look me in the eye
You’re guilty of me
I'm your own mistake

onceisnotenuff60 56M
6 posts
1/11/2006 9:05 am

True talent is not found in knowing what to write,it is found in knowing how to say it..and you my dear have that talent....Excellent work.

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