First blood  

eternal1969 47M
838 posts
8/24/2005 9:48 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

First blood


Sweet darkness
An abyss of joy
Cold starkness
Innocent like a boy

Gentle fingers
Experienced, strong
Senses tingles
As it weaves into a song

Wet tongue
Thick blood red
Caution flung
Driven by raw sexual rage

Hunger cries
The night stays young
Virgin prize
Then, thy will be done


In case you wondered, this train of thought was sparked off when I was "picked up" by a teenage girl recently. Nothing happened but it did trigger something in my mind.

rm_saintlianna 45F
15466 posts
8/26/2005 12:30 pm

I love it! Intense and dark


eternal1969 47M
1634 posts
8/26/2005 7:55 pm

It is a rather dark side to me isn't it? The girl was young and rather pretty and although I'm quite sure she isn't a virgin anymore ... the thoughts of ravaging such a young thing didn't ring the right bell in me ....... but it really caused a conflict between my morality and my physical desire... sigh .... we men are no saints... I think if she had pressed on, I would have given in....


__Huntress__ 55M/58F

8/28/2005 6:42 am

You're such a savage ... there was hunger here ... and I liked it !


eternal1969 47M
1634 posts
8/28/2005 11:15 am

I was hungry Huntress and forbidden fruits always tasted sweeter. Like I said, a little more teasing by her and the beast in me might have been unleashed


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