inspired by reicent post by coffeenocream  

eriedragon4 57M
2737 posts
1/14/2006 1:24 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

inspired by reicent post by coffeenocream

Olive Joy

Feeling the smooth green skin of an olive,
Resting gingerly on my tongue
Like my lover’s smoothest hairless skin,
I like to suck the slimy pimento out first
With tiny separate nibbles, carefully
Protecting the olive’s tender flesh from anxious incisors.

The pimento soon melts into smooth sweet juices,
Is swallowed and safely gone.
I explore the rim of the olive’s core
With the tip of my tongue and then
Suck again - harder this time
Until the whole thing collapses
Into a briny festival of flavors





LadytoPleaseYou 64F
5447 posts
1/29/2006 3:42 pm

As usual, Erie, your words excite and delight me.

PENIS CHARMING....where are you?


tillerbabe 56F

1/28/2006 9:18 am

WOW!. .thanks for sending me Keith..."Good Chit" as Mike would say...


keithcancook 60M
17859 posts
1/15/2006 6:50 am

I have never before heard the devouring of an olive put so delicately and erotically.

Thanx for sharing these well constructed lines with us.

BLOG ON!


_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F

1/15/2006 2:24 am

*blushes*
inspired by silly old coffee ?

Liefs...C


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