The Ultimate Thrill  

eriedragon4 57M
2737 posts
2/17/2006 1:00 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

The Ultimate Thrill

The Ultimate Thrill
In wan paper walls I
slide the final door
open light hands skim
arched breasts the
perfect curve black
halo acute salt stung
eyes albatross wing
brows stomach long flat
fuzzy like a girl's
feet entranced among
warm drifting milkweed you
have waited slowly
drinking your silent
caress loose muscles skin
on skin breathe hard
on my face silky tempter
bleed properly restrained
feathery lips coax
a surging tongue close the
fissure almost trembling
early energy at a damp
belly your gasping
chin cuts a wet line
over tilted peak teething
a spiral startled jump vibrates
the heart of flicking
speed each inch of back
firm cupped backs of knees
tickle arched foot
moan the snowy salt
soft ocean of gentle
lips deepen hair explore arch
into hooded tension sliding
enveloped into one
watching the stab of
unbidden cries
fiercely met with
clenched teeth built
like a kitten's escape
through your lips
leak desperate gasps as
each searing plunge
collapses into
a sticky frayed mass
drenched in perforated
ecstasy.





eriedragon4 57M
1076 posts
2/17/2006 10:20 pm

    Quoting Sister_Act_4_You:
    wow! that was awesome! did you do that as a stream of consciousness thing? or did you work on it over time? i love it!
this poem took me two weekends to write one day to edit,some times words just come to me and then i chip away at them untill a poem is revieled,lol


Sister_Act_4_You 38F/38F

2/17/2006 4:09 pm

wow! that was awesome! did you do that as a stream of consciousness thing? or did you work on it over time? i love it!


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