Mirror  

docdirk 47M
5418 posts
2/26/2006 12:16 am

Last Read:
3/13/2010 10:09 pm

Mirror

My blood flows from a thousand minor cuts
Razor thin, yet to the bone
My head throbs like canon fire on an ancient battle field
Pulsing, pounding, relentless
My heart aches for meaning in a vacuum of feeling
Grasping for floatation in an ocean of icy waters
My despair spreads like moss on a shadowed mountainside
I am aloneness
I am meaningless
I am the forgotten
I am the blank page in the book of promise
And my assault is by my own hand
I am a victim of me



Ah, Its you again, Your Angel Feathers and your Blood Stains...


champagnechaser 41F
1639 posts
2/26/2006 2:59 am

WOW! I am the blank page in the book of promise - Love that line!


kyplowboy22 61M

2/26/2006 6:33 am

Yup, we are all victims of ourseves someway or another. Very good piece, JJ. Later

kpb


rm_metalmama69 42F
3878 posts
2/26/2006 9:26 am

Well Doc, now I'm freakin' convinced that you can read minds! This is exactly how I've been feeling lately. OK...what am I thinking now?


NSAAddict 42F

2/26/2006 12:33 pm

Great poem as always Doc... full of pure emotion that I'm sure resonates in others as it does in me. Thank you for sharing it with us {=} NSA


docdirk 47M

2/26/2006 9:25 pm

CC - Glad you liked the line. Feel free to use it, and me, anytime you'd like!!!

KPB - You are, as always, the voice of reason. Thanks for your continued patronage, sir.

Metalmama - I'm much better at reading other's minds than I am my own. Usually, the words just appear without consulting me as to their meaning. I'd try to read your mind, but as always, I get lost in your eyes. After that, my pathetic mumbling would only embarrass me, so I'll quit while I'm ahead!

NSA - Wow, I resonate, that is so cool!! Seriously, as soon as you know what it means, fill me in!!

Ah, Its you again, Your Angel Feathers and your Blood Stains...


SpunkNLace 47F

2/26/2006 10:22 pm

Wow very powerful piece of writing.

S.NL


docdirk 47M

2/27/2006 8:26 pm

SpunkNLace - Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked, and am doubly glad you stopped by!

Mzhuny - As always, I am humbled by your presence! Thanks sweety!

Candy - I love that you love to read my ramblings. And as for perfection; only you can speak to that!

Ah, Its you again, Your Angel Feathers and your Blood Stains...


SilkenKiera 37F  

2/28/2006 2:54 pm

What an awsome writer you are! I know exactly what this means, I have felt the same way and couldn't express it the way that you do. Even if you only ment it figurativly, you my dear friend will never be alone! Love you!

Kiera


docdirk 47M

3/1/2006 7:45 pm

sweetneeds - Forget my mind; I got something else you can harness!! (BTW - Too damn cold to breathe the salt air now, but I love to do so when it warms up a wee bit!)

Kiera - Love ya back, sweety!! I'm glad you can understand it, cause I ain't gotta clue!

Candy - There you go, being all humble again!

Ah, Its you again, Your Angel Feathers and your Blood Stains...


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