Appaling  

docdirk 47M
5418 posts
3/1/2006 8:22 pm

Last Read:
8/16/2013 12:21 am

Appaling

….Swirling
…Churning
..Corroding
.Burning
Sharks circling the cage
Disease ravaging with rage
The stench of decay
A soul rotting away
.Worthless
..Transparent
…Loveless
….Abhorrent
Stealing each breath
Depositing only wretch
….Vampiric
…Vulturine
..Venomous
.Serpentine
Tumbling unseen
Bottomless ravine……………….

F...... .......... G ‒ Forever appaling
. A ..... ...... N
.. L.... ..... I
... L...... W
.... I..... A
..... N.. N
....... G


Copyright JJW 2006

What Would Tyler Durden Do?


Ah, Its you again, Your Angel Feathers and your Blood Stains...


SilkenKiera 38F  

3/2/2006 2:10 pm

My talented friend J.J. ~ The Poet


rm_metalmama69 42F
3878 posts
3/2/2006 2:32 pm

(((BIG Hugs)))


NSAAddict 42F

3/2/2006 3:10 pm

Tyler Durden would FIGHT and then he would say "Only after disaster can we be resurrected." And as he's walking away bloody but not beaten he would turn to you and say "The things you own end up owning you. Its not until you lose everything that you are free to do anything." Hugs, NSA


Luvwetcunt1000 48M
1258 posts
3/2/2006 9:43 pm

Doc, I'll be back soon (I hope!).

Meantime, keep 'em coming. I love the great poems.


champagnechaser 41F
1639 posts
3/3/2006 8:35 am

He would simply resurrect himself.


docdirk 47M

3/3/2006 8:46 pm

Please don't be offended. Normally, I'd take the time to address each and every one of you individually with a note of thanks and some lame comment. But I just don't have the enrgy at the moment, and I certainly don't have the mental capacity to be clever. Regardless; Candy, Sweetneeds, Kiera, Metalmama, NSA and Champagnechaser, thanks for understanding the nonsense that was this post. (Or at least tolerating it.) There is nothing like kind words from beautiful, intelligent women to lift a guys spirits. You are all wonderful, and thank you all!

Oh yeah, Luvwetcunt1000 Thanks to you as well - a dude always needs his buds as well!

Ah, Its you again, Your Angel Feathers and your Blood Stains...


docdirk 47M

3/5/2006 3:41 pm

    Quoting candy69sosweet:
    Sometimes I don't understand the writing, but I still read and enjoy. Hope you're feeling better hon....

    Kisses & Hugs,
    Candy

That's OK Candy, sometimes I have no clue what they mean either. Then again, I'm not all that bright!

Ah, Its you again, Your Angel Feathers and your Blood Stains...


Luvwetcunt1000 48M
1258 posts
3/8/2006 2:01 am

Doc, the feeling's mutual.


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