sand...seagulls..and drinks with umbrellas  

curiousinlorain7 59F
15358 posts
8/29/2006 8:38 pm

Last Read:
9/7/2006 8:45 pm

sand...seagulls..and drinks with umbrellas

I was given a challenge...or let's call it an inspiration..from
playtime44uandi and he listed those words and asked me if i was inspired by them... Here is my inspiration.... and of course playtime is going to be in my 'inspiration'

mmm eyes closed...warmth of the sun on my face...listening to the waves as they break on the sand... nice rhythmic sounds of water hitting beach... off in the distance the sounds of seagulls fills the air. The air smells of the water and the sun... pure heaven... digging my toes in the sand to find the coolness buried there... ahh... long forgotten drink... beading up with moisture from the ice within...brightly colored paper umbrella dancing in the liquid... drifting off to some fantasy... a bit of dark...cools my face as someone stands near me...blocking the sunlight on my face..." must be a good book...i see you are reading it through osmosis.." the words said softly as to not disturb me.. I know that voice...it is very recognizable to me... and a slow sensual smile plays on my lips...i lift my face to the sound of the voice..not yet opening my eyes..."this book is very good..recommend by a friend...it is just that the call of the waves called me to listen to them...." my smile is full now... my eyes still closed...the smell of the combination of his suntan lotion, cologne, and his natural smell fills my nostrils.. i know he is near..."and what would call you away from the sounds of the surf and the sunshine?" this voice whispers deep in my ear...almost touching me....I open my eyes to reach up to caress the face belonging to the voice...only to see that once again the rhythmic sound of the waves and the hypnotic warmth of the sun...and yes even the drink with that umbrella...have set me off into a fantasy...one that will be finished as I drift off to sleep...


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/29/2006 9:45 pm

    Quoting spunky11961:
    Wow, that was good!Really, Nice ending...
    ~spunky
thanks spunky... I believe you 'know' my cohort...


cyberluvr1957 59M

8/29/2006 10:00 pm

Very beautiful 'curious' loved reading it 3 times over and over

~~~Have Condoms, Will Travel~~~


.......Stay Happy, Stay Safe, Stay Well........


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/29/2006 10:51 pm

    Quoting rm_mzhunyhole:
    Now..that's what I call inspired..very nice reading.
ty mzhuny..high praise indeed coming from you


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/29/2006 10:51 pm

    Quoting cyberluvr1957:
    Very beautiful 'curious' loved reading it 3 times over and over
ty cyber...I'm glad that you liked it


goodatpoetry2 66M
12396 posts
8/30/2006 3:26 am

Yeah, right! Just leave us hanging!
You are SO mean!


rm_jurgon3 55M
4603 posts
8/30/2006 3:37 am

nice soothing words, very nice indeed. for that dear girl im going to have to give you full marks!
be lucky

Be lucky!


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/30/2006 4:28 am

    Quoting goodatpoetry2:
    Yeah, right! Just leave us hanging!
    You are SO mean!
It's a throw back from the vaudeville days.. always leave them wanting more


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/30/2006 4:30 am

    Quoting rm_jurgon3:
    nice soothing words, very nice indeed. for that dear girl im going to have to give you full marks!
    be lucky
thanks jurgon...I'm not Irish..just kissed that ol' blarney stone a time or two


Sulabula 45F
12658 posts
8/30/2006 4:47 am

That was wonderful...can see the imagery

Sula xxx

come visit my blog


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/30/2006 6:22 am

thanks..i'll take that as a compliment coming from you.. because you are a great writer


keithcancook 60M
17718 posts
8/30/2006 7:44 am

I enjoyed reading this. You write very well.

I too am inspired by those words. Soon I will be at the beach!

(when Ernesto hurries by, that is)


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/30/2006 7:51 am

thanks keith hurry away ernesto


florallei 99F

8/30/2006 12:11 pm

Hot Dang Sis, couldn't have written any better...YOU ARE ONE TERRIFIC
WRITER....WOW oh WOW!!!!
Luv,
flo


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/30/2006 3:42 pm

    Quoting florallei:
    Hot Dang Sis, couldn't have written any better...YOU ARE ONE TERRIFIC
    WRITER....WOW oh WOW!!!!
    Luv,
    flo
thanks sis


rm_Smile_My_Way 59M
1519 posts
8/30/2006 5:04 pm

I agree very well done.


cougarprey4play 40M

8/30/2006 5:48 pm

Very good use of the words!!

Playful, imaginative & creative!


playtime44uandi 52M
6545 posts
8/30/2006 6:55 pm

WOW. I'm impressed!
Should I keep on with the insparations?

Maybe after I get back from my little trip?

~We'll Leave The Light On~


rm_jurgon3 55M
4603 posts
8/30/2006 7:56 pm

    Quoting curiousinlorain7:
    thanks jurgon...I'm not Irish..just kissed that ol' blarney stone a time or two
You never kissed my blarney stone lol you knew i was gonna say that lmao
be lucky girl!

Be lucky!


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/31/2006 3:08 am

    Quoting cougarprey4play:
    Very good use of the words!!

    Playful, imaginative & creative!
thanks coug...


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/31/2006 3:10 am

    Quoting playtime44uandi:
    WOW. I'm impressed!
    Should I keep on with the insparations?

    Maybe after I get back from my little trip?
I'd love for you to keep inspiring me.. be safe on your trip... see you when you get back...J


curiousinlorain7 59F

8/31/2006 3:11 am

    Quoting rm_jurgon3:
    You never kissed my blarney stone lol you knew i was gonna say that lmao
    be lucky girl!
jurgon... i seem to have a history of setting my self up for you to be able to comment


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